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| Gav said 1290 days ago (May 11th, 2006) | |
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Better than raw Cheers Jsacker! I suppose its nice in its simplicity at the moment and if I do add more its not going to be much - I reckon simple is best for this one! thank again! Check out my latest song called Understand
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| Leon said 1290 days ago (May 11th, 2006) | |
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Loved it. I like the vocals on this song, raw and emotional and straightforward. Your voice suits a rock/country or rock/alternative genre, I think. The guitar playing is adequate, but as it is a rough take, it defintiely needs just a little more polish. Still, it sounds great. DL'd and fav'd! Check out my latest song called The Nightingale (music and lyrics by Oceans)
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| Gav said 1290 days ago (May 12th, 2006) | |
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Loved it. It sure does need more polishing - I suppose the general consensus so far from you guys is that it sounds good enough as is which is great! And I agree in teh polishing up bit - some lyrics are a bit rough cut and I could do a better take! Thanks! Check out my latest song called Understand
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| Chase Alvins said 1290 days ago (May 11th, 2006) | |
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Good Add a shaker and/or tambourine... and faster tempo... maybe? Check out my latest song called Old Recording
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| Gav said 1290 days ago (May 12th, 2006) | |
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Good Yep - I reckon thats all the percussion it needs - not sure about the uping the tempo. I'll give it a go!! Thanks Check out my latest song called Understand
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| HypnotiQ Sorcere said 1288 days ago (May 14th, 2006) | |
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nicely done what makes this song great is the vocals, very warm, the acoustic playing is a perfect compliment to it and if you ask me i think this is CD ready now lol Check out my latest song called The Rum Diary
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| HypnotiQ Sorcere said 1288 days ago (May 14th, 2006) | |
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nicely done what makes this song great is the vocals, very warm, the acoustic playing is a perfect compliment to it and if you ask me i think this is CD ready now lol Check out my latest song called The Rum Diary
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| Gav said 1286 days ago (May 15th, 2006) | |
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nicely done Thanks very much! I would disagree with the CD ready bit though - there are a few slip ups in it and though they might not stick out too much they do to me. Its a bad habit of mine - re-doing stuff that is! Thanks for posting! Check out my latest song called Understand
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| jie said 1286 days ago (May 15th, 2006) | |
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cool nice arrangment. compiments your vocal well. leave it alone. its great the way it is. cheery Check out my latest song called Gods Got HisPlans, Ive got mine
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| Gav said 1286 days ago (May 15th, 2006) | |
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cool Thanks. Was lucky with this one - you know the kind of tune that just pops out! Will try to leave it alone but I'll do another version and if that doesnt work I'll stick with this -thank you! : ) Check out my latest song called Understand
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| composerclark said 1286 days ago (May 16th, 2006) | |
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Very expressive I know others have said this already, but your voice is absolutely wonderful! Very personal, very expressive, and very much your own. Nice lyrics, but maybe you could post them? I always like to read 'em while I listen. Just a couple of issues: The guitar is a little out of tune, and your voice goes slightly flat when it goes high on "walkin'" the first time, a occasionally on high notes after that. Just try to stay "on top" of the high notes, as singers have told me. Beautiful song. You should be proud. Check out my latest song called Scarlet Nightfall
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| Gav said 1285 days ago (May 16th, 2006) | |
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Very expressive Thank you fo rthe compliments. I can hear the pitch problems myself in the song. I did each track in one take so they are the little shings I want to iron out. I'll post lyrics to this soon! cheers composerclark! Check out my latest song called Understand
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| ktb said 1285 days ago (May 16th, 2006) | |
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sounds great rough draft I'll take it. sounds fleshed out to me. has a very polished appeal. you've a fine voice and the songcraft shows. its a rainy mellow day here in NE, and this strikes me as just a nice compliment to the days end. liked this a lot Check out my latest song called off the deck (w/Z293)
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| philonnie said 1285 days ago (May 16th, 2006) | |
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Raw ....talent! I'd just echo other comments that this is a really great song and your voice sounds superb. Keep it up! cheers, phil Check out my latest song called Nothing More Nothing Less
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| BobRoberts said 1284 days ago (May 18th, 2006) | |
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Great Track I love the feeling of stumbling upon a gem like this. Great voice, lyrics, delivery, chord progression. Thanks for sharing the rough draft. Sounds great as is, but do what you gotta do. Vote, fav or comment? All of the above. 10 in song writing, easily. Check out my latest song called The One and Only
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| TobinMueller said 1250 days ago (June 20th, 2006) | |
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Potential is an understatement "Potential" is an understatement. Your vulnerable voice is perfect for this tune, and the simple sing-songwriter style as well. Consider posting your lyrics, since it would help. If you consider changing anything, consider a bridge that has more of an edge, something to make the lyrics grip more, speak to a specific emotion or action or moment that really lifts the song into the honest and unique category. Really nice song and presentation. Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)
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| jpfeiff said 1039 days ago (January 17th, 2007) | |
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Man can you sing! I love you voice. You say this is raw, but I kind of like the "sitting right in the living room" lo-fi feel of the simple strumming. With a voice like yours you can get away with it. I wouldn't recommend a whole album full of this format, but I also wouldn't recommend and album without at least one or two cuts just like this--you strumming guitar and singing your heart out. Jim Check out my latest song called The Fog
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| saymme said 629 days ago (March 3rd, 2008) | |
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.....so great to hear You again........... Missed Your Songs....I had to empty my computer loosing all the dl I had from Mj(hundreds) "I*M BACK AT YOUR DOOR* 8 ) GREAT LYRICS & REALLY GREAT SONGS YOU HAVE ! ! ! (!) Hope to hear some new ones eventually I've heard all of Yours... : ) tx so much means alot Hope U are OK : ) WELL : ) Helena |
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Good vocals. Very clear and able to be heard well. Good guitar also.
Actually, this song sounds better than a rough draft by far. You sing well.
If you do add other "stuff", make sure not to lose this raw feeling that you
have in this recording. Good job.