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Death Together (Remix) by screamalexz [Email]
Genre: Acoustic

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Uploaded: May 15, 2006 - 03:24:11 PM
Last Updated: May 15, 2006 - 03:24:11 PM
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Description:
a remix of the original, i went and redid the vocals added a bit more to them, and did some more work on the production.

Lyrics:
you feel yourself fall
ground is moving closer
please don't cry at all
cling to me forever

sweetly death comes
do not be afraid
when our blood flows
our love will not be frayed

come kiss death
my lips to yours
we take our last breath
live within these last hours

Hardware:
fender accoustic

Software:
audacity
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I . . . &mdash 05/16/06 - 10:27:03 PM
hear a bit of Elliot Smith in this song, and if you sound like him, you're
doing good work in my opinion. I like it, all in all, but the lyrics seem to
be a bit predictable. As far as the genre goes, it's a solid tune.

I heard one production issue at the end: the timing seemed to get off
between the vocals the guitar track. Maybe it was the feed, but that's
what I heard.

In peace,
Thelonious

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I . . . &mdash 05/16/06 - 10:48:08 PM
oh thanks for the elliot smith comment, at the end the guitar was fading out and the vocals didn't that may be why it sounded that way. thansk for the listen.

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Robert Smith lied, boys do cry

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I . . . &mdash 05/16/06 - 10:27:03 PM
hear a bit of Elliot Smith in this song, and if you sound like him, you're
doing good work in my opinion. I like it, all in all, but the lyrics seem to
be a bit predictable. As far as the genre goes, it's a solid tune.

I heard one production issue at the end: the timing seemed to get off
between the vocals the guitar track. Maybe it was the feed, but that's
what I heard.

In peace,
Thelonious

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I . . . &mdash 06/02/06 - 04:05:55 PM
oh yes, i think i know where the timing went off. i think i had gotten lost and didn't realize i was supposed to start singing right away. thanks for the feedback. thought i had replied to this comment a while ago guess i didn't.

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Robert Smith lied, boys do cry

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Chance encounter &mdash 05/17/06 - 11:07:29 PM
Hey, glad I stumbled upon this. Chance, you have come a long way
since "Tear Away". Way to go. Moody Donovan kind of vibe. Song is
rather dark. Got anything happy to sing about? LOL. Keep on doing the
music thing. You got a bead on it now.

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Chance encounter &mdash 05/18/06 - 11:12:03 AM
hey, thanks for the comment. once i start recording my first album this summer i promise a happy song. i have a rather happy romantic tune i want to get recorded this summer. i have to make something fluffy for caroline too.

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Robert Smith lied, boys do cry

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mellow &mdash 05/19/06 - 07:33:20 PM
Amazing improvement since your previous songs, I agree with rschletty
on that. Sweet in a kind of haunting, despairing way.

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mellow &mdash 05/19/06 - 07:41:51 PM
thanks, was what i was going for :)

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Robert Smith lied, boys do cry

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a lot better! &mdash 05/21/06 - 03:40:12 PM
This is a lot better then the last one Chance. I remember your vocals were very blurry on the previous, this time they sound much clearer! Its nice!

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a lot better! &mdash 05/21/06 - 03:45:40 PM
thanks, i'm glad you enjoyed it. now, if i can only get a good set up and get my cd recorded..

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Robert Smith lied, boys do cry

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retro groovopolis &mdash 05/23/06 - 12:42:09 AM
oy scream - nice job mate - retro as in - ever listen to any old sid barrett
tunes - "julia dream" was kinda where this took me -
i'm hearing an aweful lot of originality in this piece tho' & i toast you for
your darkest of heartfeltedness - keep it up, you & i, we're almost there,
almostly - -
mulli

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retro groovopolis &mdash 05/23/06 - 11:00:28 AM
hey, thanks for the comment. haven't ever heard those bands. must check them out.

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Robert Smith lied, boys do cry

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Death Together &mdash 05/31/06 - 05:36:04 PM
Great song. A little thin in spots but quite nice.

William

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Death Together &mdash 06/02/06 - 03:50:16 PM
thanks for the comment, not sure what you mean by thin. do you mean the vocals?

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Robert Smith lied, boys do cry

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