liking the way the instrumental is put together. vocals are a little airy, but generally good. should post the lyrics. perhaps a little more emotion into the vocal part. its a little distracting when the vocal part has to speed up to keep up with the melody. over all this is a good song.

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I like how the songs slowly builds up tension that's never really released -
very good approach for a song about infidelity and not forgiving. Sweet
singing and synth strings.
Mix-wise, the bass seems a little overwhelming in my headphones, to the
point of distorting sometimes.

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Meaning the song as such. Your singing is also good as usual.

But I have some problems with the mix: the drums are a tad loud, and the
bass could use some compression and bit less lows. On my (expensive)
monitors the bass does not distort but I can imagine that on lesser
speakers it does. Finally, that lone synth is a bit sparse. I would try one
that has a broader sound, and maybe throw in an acoustic guitar?

The song deserves a better mix....

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