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| screamalexz said 1288 days ago (May 17th, 2006) | |
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rough rough takes are always the best. some nice picking. it's got a good start. definately rough, the fast picking could use some work. some vocals would work well with this piece once you get it flushed out. Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)
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| rsolorio said 1288 days ago (May 17th, 2006) | |
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Needs work As you said it's a rough. So here go my cooments. First tune the guitar. The tone is good maybe a little boomy. Since you have various guitars playing they need some way to separate from the mix. Panning or changing the EQs of one of the guitars. Strumming instruments to the sides lead instruments front and center. If you're not comfortable using the metrenome feature try laying down a "drum loop" scratch track, that just plays along for x number of measures. That way you could add stuff, in time, and give it a more polished feel. I know it's hard to get all the notes in, but with the editing options available you could slice and dice the lead part from multiple takes and make it into one nicely flowing piece. Keep at it, jewels start out rough too. Check out my latest song called Bass Thoughts
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| TheReverendAG said 1287 days ago (May 18th, 2006) | |
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Needs work The guitar doesn't sound in tune to you? Maybe I'm losing my ear... --- "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" -HST Check out my latest song called Can't Stand it
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| Godchaser said 1285 days ago (May 20th, 2006) | |
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there she goes There is something in this my friend,a good feel but very strained.I would try again w/ multiple tracks to accomplish the guitar melody you have rollin' along your noggin'.Polish and,.......... then display! -Godchaser Check out my latest song called As i Walk
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| Godchaser said 1285 days ago (May 20th, 2006) | |
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there she goes There is something in this my friend,a good feel but very strained.I would try again w/ multiple tracks to accomplish the guitar melody you have rollin' around your noggin'.Polish and,.......... then display! -Godchaser Check out my latest song called As i Walk
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| screamalexz said 611 days ago (March 24th, 2008) | |
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... ehh true versions are over rated lol. having it stuck in your head all day is a good reason to record happens to me sometimes. i think it sounds good. often the best songs come out of a good half an hour of work. Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)
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Obviously, needs some work, as you suggested. There are some good
possibilities here. Good attack on the picking and strummin. Try to
make it less repetitive by mixing in other chords. I only hear two.