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jonx

Genre: Alternative Rock

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another, newer version...

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Lyrics

come on, morning bring
all your welcome news...
i know better things
are on their way...

just let the empty threats
all curl and dry...
we'll soon forget...
-turn and smile...

in loves' sweet decay...

come on midsummer...
let your wandering light
brighten this/room to slight effect...

maybe some new decor
is what we're waiting for...

Song Stats

Hits: 1921
Comments: 14
Fans: 15
Plays: 220
Downloads: 96
Votes: 10
Uploaded: May 19, 2006 - 02:15:27 PM
Last Updated: May 19, 2006 - 02:15:27 PM Last Played: Sep 21, 2009 - 06:10:28 PM

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Scott Carmichael	Scott Carmichael said 1283 days ago (May 19th, 2006)
	great work love it absolutley... your on a tear... always love your work... come live in NJ Check out my latest song called Good Morning

	said 1282 days ago (May 19th, 2006)
	Nice tune... as usual! You sure know how to write a catchy tune. Vocals are perfect, as is the mix from where I sit.

thetiler	thetiler said 1282 days ago (May 20th, 2006)
	Love that Jonx vocal sound, nice recording! Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)

Peter Greenstone

Peter Greenstone said 1281 days ago (May 21st, 2006)

great again
Another great work. Your lyrics are always supurb. I could go on and on
about what's right about this but that's all obvious. So I'll point out one
criticism: the vocals seem just a little too isolated in the mix. Perhaps
they need to come down just a bit or maybe something else needs to
come up to meet them more. Perhaps the drums could come up. It's a
small adjustment whatever it is that is needed.

Oh, and a nit: the sound at the end just cuts off. Let the instruments
finish before you cut it.

Check out my latest song called From Nothing

composerclark

composerclark said 1281 days ago (May 21st, 2006)

Wonderful
Wonderful lyrics, as always. What I like about your lyrics is that they
are poetry -- they make you think, they move you, and there is usually
some kind of enigma there. They make sense.

I agree with pgreenstone that the vocal(s) seem a bit too isolated from
the instruments, but only a bit. I know nothing about recording
techniques, so I'm afraid I can't offer any possible suggestions for that.

It felt to me that the ending should be decaying in some way... you're
repeating the words "in love's sweet decay," so I think it might be
worth a try to start thinning things out, gradually, as this is going on
(loosing the vocal harmony, decreasing the activity level of the guitar
accompaniment; whatever you can think of). Differenet strokes for
different folks, so it's fine if you don't like this idea.

My other idea is not to end with such a conclusive chord -- the guitar
ends with a V-I cadence, which is how most music ends, but there was
something about the feel of this song that made me think a less
conclusive cadence might work well, like ending on a IV chord, maybe.

Great tune.

Check out my latest song called Scarlet Nightfall

jonx	jonx said 1281 days ago (May 21st, 2006)
	Wonderful good idea c.c---i hate fade-outs in general, but your idea about decreasing the elements of the mix is a good one-i never think about that stuff and yeah, i've been going through a spell of elevated vocals---i think i submitted a song where they were too low and now i'm over-reacting-thanks for all your comments-rawk on! Check out my latest song called september sky

thetiler	thetiler said 1281 days ago (May 21st, 2006)
	nice singin and playin! You have a very good natural sounding voice. Of course you must hear that or something similar but it is true. Cool sounds! Way to go! Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)

Stun Nutz	Stun Nutz said 1280 days ago (May 21st, 2006)
	yeah I agree with Pgreenstone and Composerclark about the ending... but overall, this was another great jonx tune. Check out my latest song called Gossamer dissected

	said 1280 days ago (May 21st, 2006)
	Very nice Good voice. Music and vocals match well together in this song. Could even boost the music a bit, but other than that it is a great song.

Einarus	Einarus said 1278 days ago (May 24th, 2006)
	Beautiful Yet another addition to my Jonx playlist. Gorgeous! Check out my latest song called Good Things Come in Fours

jesushairdo

jesushairdo said 1276 days ago (May 26th, 2006)

Absolutely gorgeous!!
i loved the first decor very much, but hey, the new version is also
absolutely gorgeous!! do you play all the instruments by yourself? i
always love the guitar sounds and the subtle drum sounds in your
music, and this one wasnt an exception.

i cant believe someone actually rated so low in originality/criativity,
who obviously did not pay attention on your beautiful words. but
anyway, you wouldnt care less rating system anyway....

ive been sick in bed for a week now but your song felt to me like a
fresh breathe coming in my bedroom. hopefully, i would be able to get
a real fresh air this weekend.

Check out my latest song called Elephant in the Sky (Orchestra version)

ktb	ktb said 1225 days ago (July 16th, 2006)
	singular Jonx, you have such a tranquil and resonating vocal. Great job on the backing tracks and the especially the back up voices. Lyrically as strong as ever. Check out my latest song called off the deck (w/Z293)

j2morrow	j2morrow said 1176 days ago (September 3rd, 2006)
	Your songs never fails to show a new slant on life. I like the understated music backing these lyrics. Just grand. Check out my latest song called CAPTURE THE RAPTURE

slide

slide said 1133 days ago (October 16th, 2006)

Hey!....
...this almost feels like I could have been playing on this one - excellent
stuff. I like it when I hear the singer with clarity - nice to hear the
drummer doing his thing but not overdoing it - tasty backing vocals -
nice "air" in this song. Jolly good music mate! :-) Reminds me of a song I
did called "redemption". Hmm, I gotta upload that song here I think.

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The terms alternative rock and alternative music[1] were coined in the early 1980s to describe punk rock-inspired music genres which didn't fit into the mainstream genres of the time. At times it was used as catch-all phrase for rock music from under

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