Take Your Leave

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DJ_Veit

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A piece written for anyone thats pissed at the world and wants a good lift. I may have crossed into new territory with this one combining emo, acoustic, and hardcore. check it out the screams are awesome

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Lyrics

Hey there, yeah you
I'm talking to you.
You hear this song?
Good, fuck you!
I know you think
that im easy.
Can't be who
I want to be.
Well guess what!
You little fucker.
This is my world
NOW LEAVE!

Chorus:
You crawl into
All of my time.
You try to be
What you think is sublime.
But trust me dear
You've lost my intrigue
Now get away from me
TAKE YOUR LEAVE!

We used to dream it
We used to understand it
But then you darling
Had to blow it *snicker*
Why do you think
That I'm afloat?
Can't you see?
I don't even have a boat.
And if I did
You think I'd take it
Out with you?
WE'D SINK!

Chorus:
You crawl into
All of my time.
You try to be
What you think is sublime.
But trust me dear
You've lost my intrigue
Now get away from me
TAKE YOUR LEAVE!

Chorus:
You crawl into
All of my time.
You try to be
What you think is sublime.
But trust me dear
You've lost my intrigue
Now get away from me
TAKE YOUR LEAVE!

Song Stats

Hits: 778
Comments: 7
Fans: 0
Plays: 199
Downloads: 38
Votes: 5
Uploaded: May 23, 2006 - 04:57:43 PM
Last Updated: May 23, 2006 - 04:57:43 PM Last Played: Apr 29, 2009 - 06:02:46 AM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Keywords:

die (19)

Hardware:

Indiana acoustic guitar
Playstation 2 USB headset wrapped in a sock
Once again my amazingly sexy voice

Software:

garageband

Comments

springclock	springclock said 1283 days ago (May 23rd, 2006)
	funny funny stuff......really like the phone tone to the vocals....a good time Check out my latest song called Magnetar

Einarus

Einarus said 1283 days ago (May 23rd, 2006)

Leaning both ways
I both like and dislike this track.
The guitar part is pretty good - although quite repetitive. The chord
progression reminded me more of a nice poppy song rather than some
hardcore emo song, but then again, emo isn't exactly my specialty.
The vocals need some work and the screams did not work for me. I've
never been a fan of the "screaming for the sake of screaming" thing. I
also thought it didn't really fit with the nice guitar chords. Seemed like
quite the clash of emotions - maybe that's what you were going for,
but it didn't really work for me.
I must reiterate, though - I don't normally listen to this genre (emo/
hardcore etc.) so I don't really 'know' what i'm talking about.
This song has some potential, though - keep it up!
-E

Check out my latest song called Running Scared (w/ Ziti)

DJ_Veit	DJ_Veit said 1282 days ago (May 23rd, 2006)
	Leaning both ways haha thanks!! yeah i was screaming cuz i want the person to leave man! get outa here!!! Check out my latest song called Distant Dubs

	said 1282 days ago (May 23rd, 2006)
	Cool I like the vocals, sounds pretty cool, like a phone, but it would be an awesome thing if you could rework this song into where eventually a whole band comes in with clear crisp vocals and an awesome rock sound! You have a good concept here. I think this song could really have a future with a little work. But, if it stays this way, it is still really neat, especially the vocals!

screamalexz	screamalexz said 1279 days ago (May 26th, 2006)
	a nice start mix on the vocals is interesting. the lyrics are entertaining. not sure i like the way the screaming is done, it needs to be more let loose and full on. i agree this could be turned into something with some work. nice creative idea. Check out my latest song called Die (Album Version)

ToneDef	ToneDef said 1087 days ago (December 4th, 2006)
	Interesting There are some creative things happening here. I dig the guitar chords in the background but they seem too happy for the tone of the voals. Nice mix - just different - and different is good. Check out my latest song called New Mix-Stereo

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Name: Danny Veit

Names Danny and i hail from St. louis, Missouri - home of the arch... and not much else. I got into this stuff about 2 years back. I started using loops n stuff. Then I got a book and started to compose. I like it. I enjoy it. But most importantly,... [see more]

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