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Take Your Leave [Explicit] by DJ_Veit [Email]
Genre: Acoustic

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Comments: 6
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Last Played: May 01, 2008 - 09:42:51 AM
Downloads: 22
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Uploaded: May 23, 2006 - 04:57:43 PM
Last Updated: May 23, 2006 - 04:57:43 PM
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Description:
A piece written for anyone thats pissed at the world and wants a good lift. I may have crossed into new territory with this one combining emo, acoustic, and hardcore. check it out the screams are awesome

Lyrics:
Hey there, yeah you
I'm talking to you.
You hear this song?
Good, fuck you!
I know you think
that im easy.
Can't be who
I want to be.
Well guess what!
You little fucker.
This is my world
NOW LEAVE!

Chorus:
You crawl into
All of my time.
You try to be
What you think is sublime.
But trust me dear
You've lost my intrigue
Now get away from me
TAKE YOUR LEAVE!

We used to dream it
We used to understand it
But then you darling
Had to blow it *snicker*
Why do you think
That I'm afloat?
Can't you see?
I don't even have a boat.
And if I did
You think I'd take it
Out with you?
WE'D SINK!

Chorus:
You crawl into
All of my time.
You try to be
What you think is sublime.
But trust me dear
You've lost my intrigue
Now get away from me
TAKE YOUR LEAVE!

Chorus:
You crawl into
All of my time.
You try to be
What you think is sublime.
But trust me dear
You've lost my intrigue
Now get away from me
TAKE YOUR LEAVE!

Hardware:
Indiana acoustic guitar
Playstation 2 USB headset wrapped in a sock
Once again my amazingly sexy voice

Software:
garageband
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funny &mdash 05/23/06 - 05:04:47 PM
funny stuff......really like the phone tone to the vocals....a good time

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Leaning both ways &mdash 05/23/06 - 05:11:53 PM
I both like and dislike this track.
The guitar part is pretty good - although quite repetitive. The chord
progression reminded me more of a nice poppy song rather than some
hardcore emo song, but then again, emo isn't exactly my specialty.
The vocals need some work and the screams did not work for me. I've
never been a fan of the "screaming for the sake of screaming" thing. I
also thought it didn't really fit with the nice guitar chords. Seemed like
quite the clash of emotions - maybe that's what you were going for,
but it didn't really work for me.
I must reiterate, though - I don't normally listen to this genre (emo/
hardcore etc.) so I don't really 'know' what i'm talking about.
This song has some potential, though - keep it up!
-E

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Leaning both ways &mdash 05/23/06 - 05:15:20 PM
haha thanks!! yeah i was screaming cuz i want the person to leave man! get
outa here!!!

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Cool &mdash 05/23/06 - 11:02:00 PM
I like the vocals, sounds pretty cool, like a phone, but it would be an
awesome thing if you could rework this song into where eventually a
whole band comes in with clear crisp vocals and an awesome rock sound!
You have a good concept here. I think this song could really have a future
with a little work. But, if it stays this way, it is still really neat, especially
the vocals!

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a nice start &mdash 05/26/06 - 08:36:10 PM
mix on the vocals is interesting. the lyrics are entertaining. not sure i like the way the screaming is done, it needs to be more let loose and full on. i agree this could be turned into something with some work. nice creative idea.

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Interesting &mdash 12/04/06 - 08:39:54 PM
There are some creative things happening here. I dig the guitar chords in the background but they seem too happy for the tone of the voals.
Nice mix - just different - and different is good.

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