This is just begging for some vocals! I think they would really spice things
up.
The production needs some improvement, too - the distortion on
everything is really distracting. I don't know if that was intentional but it
didn't work for me.
Otherwise it's not bad - keep it up!

-E

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It is a good arrangement, however you have almost too much distortion, it
actually makes the speakers rattle and sound like they are broken.
Otherwise it's pretty good. I would add vocals into this. That would spice
it up and make a good song

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