fluchtbewegung

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during working on new songs this is a kinda spinn-off..... don´t know what to do with it...
so maybe anybody like it... maybe not.... don´t be afraid... it´s just 1:39

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linker fuss kommt vor dem rechten
dies ist eine fluchtbewegung
rechter fuss kommt vor dem linken
dies ist eine fluchtbewegung

ein schritt jagt den naechsten....
gedanken folgen auf dem fuss....
ein gedanke jagt den naechsten.....

faellt über den vorherigen her
foerdert konfusion zu tage
laesst verzweiflung zurueck.....

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Hits: 900
Comments: 6
Fans: 1
Plays: 117
Downloads: 45
Votes: 4
Uploaded: May 26, 2006 - 03:06:07 PM
Last Updated: May 27, 2006 - 02:56:39 PM Last Played: Jul 13, 2009 - 02:02:13 PM

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jiguma

jiguma said 1280 days ago (May 26th, 2006)

Echt gut!
Olaf, this stands up pretty well as it is, but could also be developed by
improving the ending (not changing it, just making what you've done a
bit cleaner). I know this probably isn't what you want to hear aber es
klingt zu mir wie neunundneunzig luftbalons. Ich bin ein Nina-fan,
und so dass ist ein kompliment! I'm sure that there will be people here
who can give you better advice than me in this genre, but it sounds
good to me. By the way, the pic on your artist page is a classic!
Neil

Check out my latest song called Lost In Translation (w Mike Watkins)

	said 1279 days ago (May 26th, 2006)
	Good song With a little clarity to the overall sound this can reallly be a good song. Especially the main riff works very well together with your vocal quality. There seems to be a popping sound, maybe a drum or percussion that seems to be muddying up the whole thing, I'd get rid of that, but other than that, it is a good arrangement! Good job.

moorlandt	moorlandt said 1279 days ago (May 27th, 2006)
	With a little more work... ... this track could easily become a solid rock song. So I agree with Jonathan and Neil on that. I think German really fits this kind of genre. So please also publish the lyrics :-) My advice is to work this out, 'cause it's really worth it. Walter Check out my latest song called boundaries

	said 1279 days ago (May 27th, 2006)
	Very Enjoyable Good energetic performance here. I like the song - haven't any idea what you're singing about, but that's OK. The mix is muddy, but that takes me back to the sounds of 1976, so if that was a choice of yours, I can go with it.

macgalver	macgalver said 1260 days ago (June 15th, 2006)
	Do with it? It's a fun little ride. I think it's perfectly realized. This sounds very theme-songish. Like it could be on tv show or something. I think you just need to add another cycle, maybe toss in a bit of a break and then finish it up! It's a great melody. Check out my latest song called First Sight

	said 1244 days ago (July 1st, 2006)
	alternativer rock? ja, das kannn schon sein. Erinnert ein wenig and die fruehen "Aerzte". Es ist was es ist, ein song der Spass macht und die Laenge is perfekt. Ein richtiger "Garagen" song, rauh, kurz und schmerzlos wie es sein sollte. Hoffe es gibt ein paar mehr von diesen "spin-offs" in der Zukunft.

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