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| Peter Greenstone said 1269 days ago (June 2nd, 2006) | |
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very cool I really like this raw, punkish tune. Very cool. The backing vocal part sounds fantastic in this arrangement. I agree with jsacker that the vocals may be just a bit too dry. I think just a little echo and/or MatrixReverb ("Plate" preset with the wet/dry slider set to about 10%) would do the trick. It would get the lead vocal and the rest to intermingle just enough. Anyway, everything else about it from your delivery to the guitars and bass, and the overall melody and structure sounds great to me. Check out my latest song called From Nothing
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| aivan said 1253 days ago (June 19th, 2006) | |
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Great pop song!!! Reminds me The Pixies... and that's GREAT! I love the chorus, the background voices... (oooooooh-oh-oh-ooooooooh) Just adding some echo in GarageBand would do the trick, I think... Check out my latest song called Mi Veneno (reworked)
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| aivan said 1253 days ago (June 19th, 2006) | |
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Great pop song!!! Ehem... I was referring to the lead vocal with that echo comment... :) Check out my latest song called Mi Veneno (reworked)
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| Epileptic Gibbon said 1245 days ago (June 26th, 2006) | |
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Blimey, I've not seen you on MacJams for ages! I thought I hadn't been around for a while! This is a good piece of songwriting, but there were elements of the production and performance that I felt let it down somewhat overall. I'm sure you know what I mean already. With a bit of work, particularly on the vocals, you could undoubtedly get the best out of this. I wish you well with it. Check out my latest song called Fiddler Off the Roof w/Komrade K & Caroline
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Nice clean sound. Guitar is really good, sounds great to me. The vocals
are a bit dry..as in no reverb or echo. This is probably on purpose, but it
seem uncomfortable at certain times to listen to. Maybe adding a little
reverb, maybe try AUMatrixReverb. It seems to work well with me...but
you may not have that plug in. I have a newer version, and I am a newer
user, so I may not really be the one to listen to anyway!!! haha...this is a
very enjoyable and good song. Good job