You have a good melody and good line-ending "coloratura" (singing
with florid ornamentation or embellishment). I don't get the sense of it
being overdone, however. You have just the right amount. The problem
with this, as you suggested, is the excessive echo. I have a hard time
understanding the lyrics. A better microphone might help, too. I
suggest you post the lyrics here.

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true I have a non echoing version so if anything this time around it can be played around with when and if a future effort is offered

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