Good mixed sound. Pain is one that is so short. I wait
for your next work.

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Though very brief I sense the beginning of something very good here
there's sure to be someone on this site willing to add their God giving
gift of voice and word once it is further developed-it's got a great
start-
-Godchaser

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It is brief for sure - I pictured it as a kinda 'outro' to an album... leave 30
seconds or so of dead space after the second to last tune - and then have this
fade in and out to end the album.

I wrote it on my birthday (jan 12) hence made it exactly 1:12 long...

Thanks for the feedback - I'll post some more stuff here shortly!

J>


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Thanks for the comments - I've had some offers on the singing - even a rough
mix that sounded pretty good! A guy in Australia is taking a crack and I hope to
upload the colaboration :)

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this has the makings of a really great tune... continue. I want to hear
the rest of it.

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What they said- finish it! It sounds really good so far.

I appreciate that the synth is very subtle and more garnish to the song than a major element thereof..

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I'm afraid I may not do much more with this one... I've decided I'll keep it as a
fade in fade out deal - have a couple folks who have offered to through lyrics
down and sing so if I get something there I may haev second thoughts and see a
whole song take shape - versus, choruses, all that! :)

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Nice little ditty, very Coldplay in sound and sounds good overall as a
"taster". Produced and mixed well.


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I checked out some of your stuff - speed of light has a great mix - great guitar
playing to boot!

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