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Melody Song (demo) by urbnite [Email]
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Hits: 1185
Comments: 42
Votes: 5
Plays: 230
Last Played: Jul 28, 2008 - 09:00:04 AM
Downloads: 29
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Uploaded: Jun 09, 2006 - 05:44:38 PM
Last Updated: Jun 15, 2006 - 06:59:00 PM



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Description:
a demo. not perfect. i think the neighbors must hate me.

just finished writing today - this is a get it down recording. first take. may flesh it out later with more guitars or something.

the birds sang with me.

Lyrics:
i can't fly
with you
i might cry
will you

soar
higher than ever before

your stone cold skin
gold complexion
leave no room for
imperfection

make mistakes
we will
but we'll move tanks
uphill

and

soar,
soar
higher than ever before

i can't fly
with you
i might cry

Hardware:
seagull
powerbook
hands
voice
bluetube
firewire 410

Software:
gb
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I &mdash 06/09/06 - 05:54:36 PM
really dig your guitar playing. And though this isn't a style of music I listen to at all, I did enjoy the song.

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I &mdash 06/13/06 - 03:47:42 PM
hey pv -

thanks for the kind words. glad i got you with something you wouldn't normally
like...

- d

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song art &mdash 06/14/06 - 12:13:07 AM
By the way, that is one weird cool image... everytime I look at it I try to
figure out what the heck is going on. I really dig it.

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my cat loves this song &mdash 06/10/06 - 01:52:41 AM
when the track started, she jumped right up on the table near the speakers and listened intently until it finished and then meowed in approval. i would meow in approval to but would rather tell you how melancholy this track made me feel. suits the rainy weather that we have here in brisbane.............

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my cat loves this song &mdash 06/13/06 - 03:48:37 PM
there seems to be a pattern of my uploads matching your weather... maybe i'm
living in the wrong place. it's sunny here!

anyway, glad you and the cat liked this one.

thanks vader.

- d

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my cat loves this song &mdash 06/13/06 - 03:57:28 PM
hahahaha, thats true. allthough id admit i sorta choose to play your stuff when the weather is drab cause your music brightens up the day. this mindset implies that if i listened to your music when its bright and sunny, i would end up in a fluro world.
this doesnt happen.......
sends the cats crazy but............................

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intimate &mdash 06/10/06 - 02:32:06 AM
a great vocal performance....nice intimate live feel of a demo...you could
flesh this one out nicely some day with a full band
Do you record everything in one go as a live take?

Steve

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intimate &mdash 06/13/06 - 03:50:17 PM
hey steve!

thanks - glad you enjoyed it.

i might do this real soon with a full band.

and yes, i've decided to use my home rig for just one track demos. i'm not
one for fiddling with dials - i just want to play. i'm going into a studio soon
with a band and engineer and whatnot, so i figured i don't have to bother
much about that.

anyway - thanks again for the lovely words.

- d

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DEMO?? &mdash 06/12/06 - 02:06:40 PM
this is pretty dandy for just a demo....like that acoustic tone once again
and the voice resonates very nicely....I like that you sing with a yearning,
it's really comes through strong on this bare bones track.....cool song and
cool lyrics....Peace....Ian

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DEMO?? &mdash 06/13/06 - 03:51:34 PM
demo is a relative term maybe...

but yes, the song is there. and i'm glad you liked it.

thanks man.

- d

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hey mister &mdash 06/14/06 - 03:55:50 AM
I think you should fully orchestrate this tune. Drums, bass, key board,
more guitars.Maybe strings, brass and woodwindsas well. This a very
nice song

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hey mister &mdash 06/14/06 - 04:04:27 AM
hey tom -

that sounds like a lot of work and i don't have the mind to think of all those
parts - i might give it a go with bass and drums, though...

thanks for the kind words!

- d

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Very nice song &mdash 06/15/06 - 11:13:04 AM
Very nice and mellow song here. I understand that this is a demo, so I'm
trying to listen to how things could sound eventually... and what I'd want
to make sure is that you have some nice crisp diction when you do record
this for real. I say this because my first listen through, I sorta just
thought you were 'Oooh-ing' all the way through until I noticed the lyrics
you had posted. Just make sure you can hear the lyrics properly and
theres a decent distinction between your 'oohs' and your words and I
think this'll turn out quite nicely.

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Very nice song &mdash 06/15/06 - 11:24:43 AM
hey bryan -

thanks... yeah, i typically need to work on diction. and this was very new when i
recorded it. it's hard to tell because i know the words, i can hear them.

we'll see how it turns out... i might record this with the band. although, i just
really wrote it as a personal thing.

- d

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What an intro! &mdash 06/15/06 - 02:17:06 PM
I have always envied your energic and dynamic guitarplay! This song sounds a bit more available for the mainstream then your other song! Wich of course is a good thing! Im still waiting to hear one of your bands recordings Darren! Thanks!

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What an intro! &mdash 06/15/06 - 05:23:44 PM
thanks magnus!

you just need to beat up your guitar like i do... but i like your style as well.

band recordings - yes - must do that soon!

- d

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Good song! &mdash 06/15/06 - 05:01:48 PM
I agree with the composer regarding diction, because the same thing
happened to me -- I was chatting with you and didn't realize there
were lyrics.

Other than that, though, some wonderful guitar playing that mirrored
the emotions very nicely. I wouldn't mind you coming out of falsetto at
some point, to add some variation to the vocals, but that isn't to take
away from an emotional performance.

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Good song! &mdash 06/15/06 - 05:26:10 PM
yes, diction has always been my downfall. even in everyday speech. i'm
working on it!

and yes, when i redo this, it won't be so much in falsetto. although my voice
is in no shape to sing a high B otherwise. but yeah, i had been working on it
all day and i thought the neighbors must be going up the walls, so i backed
off a bit...

thanks for your insight, though - it's always worthwhile!

glad you liked the guitar!

- d

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Nice &mdash 06/15/06 - 05:45:01 PM
I would have liked more words my this song creates a mood just with the
melody - thus the title I guess.

It's like you took a private moment of reflection and genuine joy and
shared it just with me. Seriously. It felt intimate and that's the strength of
it. Enjoyed it. Good counterpoint to my misery.

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Nice &mdash 06/17/06 - 05:12:50 PM
thanks cipher...

yeah, i've been trying to write with few words lately, so that's intentional.
simplicity is what i'm aiming for. i hope it worked anyway.

funny that you thought of it as a moment of joy because it kind of is, but i feel
like most people would hear a sad song in this one. maybe it's the lyrics.

anyway, i'm glad i was able to be your counterpoint.

- d

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Great demo! &mdash 06/16/06 - 05:59:10 PM
I really like your singing voice, gives the song the plaintive edge that it
demands. Fine acoustic playing too -- can't wait to hear the fleshed-
out version!

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Great demo! &mdash 06/17/06 - 05:13:53 PM
thanks mr. a!

you might have to wait a bit for a finished version, but hopefully not too long!

- d

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Nice &mdash 06/21/06 - 01:22:09 AM
Thanks for pluggin' this. Has a nice live Niel Young feel to it. Very well
done. I really don't know what I could suggest to improve this. I like it
just the way it is. Maybe some audience noise. Sounds like it was
recorded in a very intimate club setting and all that's missing is the
audience :)

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Nice &mdash 06/22/06 - 07:14:49 PM
Thanks for pluggin' this. Has a nice live Niel Young feel to it. Very well
done. I really don't know what I could suggest to improve this. I like it
just the way it is. Maybe some audience noise. Sounds like it was
recorded in a very intimate club setting and all that's missing is the
audience :)

hey bug...

neil young ain't bad - i'll take that. audience noise, huh? laugh track?
brilliant! ha.

thanks for the kind words.

- d

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Nice &mdash 06/21/06 - 01:36:32 AM
Thanks for pluggin' this. Has a nice live Niel Young feel to it. Very well
done. I really don't know what I could suggest to improve this. I like it
just the way it is. Maybe some audience noise. Sounds like it was
recorded in a very intimate club setting and all that's missing is the
audience :)

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Nice &mdash 06/22/06 - 07:15:50 PM
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interesting &mdash 06/22/06 - 07:17:12 PM
I like the fact that you can tell that you are really stretching for this one. It brings out the emotion and the depth of the song. A lot of interesting dynamics here. This isn't really the kind of music that I usually listen to, but I can get behind the raw energy. That's what we're here for, right?!?

Mason

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interesting &mdash 06/23/06 - 12:22:20 PM
hey mason,

glad you like the energy... that's what i try to capture i guess.

thanks!

- d

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I must say that I am a fan. &mdash 06/24/06 - 01:28:41 PM
Interesting vocals. Disjointed rhythm. Nice guitar.

Good stuff.

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I must say that I am a fan. &mdash 06/28/06 - 12:19:07 PM
thanks reverend!

- d

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ok &mdash 06/28/06 - 12:19:59 PM
Crying style vocals are very good so as the guitar.
This is a good bed for a great song. I'm diggin' it.

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ok &mdash 06/29/06 - 12:05:47 AM
thanks craft!

- d

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Great &mdash 07/01/06 - 12:21:43 PM
Liked the melody (what a surprise). Nice guitar playing too.

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Great &mdash 07/01/06 - 12:23:10 PM
thanks blue!

welcome to MJ!

- d

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Great "LIVE" sound &mdash 07/01/06 - 12:49:00 PM
Quaint, intimate, crescendos, decrescendos, expressive guitar, but I want
to hear harmonies in the vocals!

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Great "LIVE" sound &mdash 07/01/06 - 01:04:44 PM
hey alimar!

thanks a bunch - you're right, C is my friend. i'll try your harmony idea
sometime soon... :)

- d

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A very earthy recording &mdash 07/01/06 - 01:09:00 PM
I liked the melody and the playing and would like to hear you expand
and refine the tune.
Cheers

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the masses return! &mdash 07/01/06 - 01:20:51 PM
hey mr...

thanks man... yeah, maybe do something more with this. harmonies as alimar
suggested? i dunno... maybe teach it to 'the band'?

anyway - glad you're back around!

thanks again!

- d

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something about your lyrics &mdash 07/01/06 - 07:19:30 PM
is always sublime. Perfect if you will. this is such a nice song to space out
to (which is what I'm doing now). Demo or not... with this simple
approach it's lovely.

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something about your lyrics &mdash 07/01/06 - 07:33:40 PM
cj! thanks so much - what a lovely compliment. i'm glad you're able to space
out to my demo!

glad to see you around again!

- d

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Good Stuff &mdash 07/01/06 - 07:26:07 PM
Glad I ran into you in the chat. Very real and down to earth performance.
Really enjoyed it.

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Good Stuff &mdash 07/01/06 - 07:34:53 PM
hey AquilA -

thanks for the kind words - always good to run into new people in chat for sure!

see you around, i hope.

- d

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