Love your singing tone. Shit, wish I had that. Love the song. Works on
its own. Maybe another acoustic is all I would add. Sound is less than
studio, but you prolly know that. Great track.

Only gripe is all the vibrato at the top of the A section. I would try a bit
less. But you do what you like :)

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btw, I was describing you to my wife, so she had a listen. I likened it to Ben
Harper and she agreed. She also said that it's a bit like John Mayer, but better. I
hope you think thats a good thing. Peace.

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My Wife <a href="http://www.macjams.com/song/18379">Revealed</a>

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Nice voice Austin, and a really well constructed song. Listening on
crap speakers and it still sounds good. Some of your phrasing
reminds me of Van Morrison (a very good thing), but your sound
overall seems very original.
Welcome to MacJams - must look at your other songs posted, and
listen to this again on better speakers.
Neil

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I dig your use of internal rhymes, your singer-songwriter intimacy, your
strong writing. A great demo. My ears want a brighter sound for your
guitar, with more edge; and you have a tendency to lean into the mic at
the end of your phrases, making the last syllables louder than the first
ones in a phrase. Really nice song.

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Pretty cool song. Really good vocal tone. Singing is right on with the
rhythm also. Good job

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