A lucid, tightly produced piece that for me went on too long. After a
while the incessant violins became a bit tiresome. Would have liked more
varity there. Maybe a longer base line underneath to give the strings more
texture. Toward the end you began to change up on the violins, which
was a promising but then you seemed to hold back and shifted into the
same pattern. But it all moves pretty well. Nice work.

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