Hey GUION, it seems like you had a good time playing this tune. I like the guitar and mostly I like the joyful energy that you bring through it.

As for the drums, I would recommend to loose the random hi-hat beats that you've put into it. I don't feel they give any value to the beat.

Is it you playing all instruments here? Nice walking bassguitar and a suited piano.

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Thanks Thor for your commentary and your advice. I am going it to follow in
the future.
I hope see you in Tenerife.

Cheers.

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Liking what I"m hearing. Thoddi said, "joyful energy". I suppose that's
the best word for it. It really is uplifting. I really like the melody and
piano line is very pleasing. I also love the lead. I think this has lots of
potential! I want it to keep going! Canary Islands? You, lucky, lucky,
man. I almost feel myself on that beach--cheers, friend. kelli

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Liking what I"m hearing. Thoddi said, "joyful energy". I suppose that's
the best word for it. It really is uplifting. I really like the melody and
piano line is very pleasing. I also love the lead. I think this has lots of
potential! I want it to keep going! Canary Islands? You, lucky, lucky,
man. I almost feel myself on that beach--cheers, friend. kelli

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Tanks Kelli, you have a precious voice. I thank for your amiable opinion to you. I
know that I am lucky to live in the Canary Islands. Thoddi it has here been and it
says that it likes. I hope that it returns.
The photo suggests freedom, right? And it is a nice beach. You would have to
think about visiting it someday.

Cheers Kelli and tankyou again.

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