Unseen by stuck2mojo [Email]
Genre: Rock
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My first attempt at an entire song. I am almost embarrassed to submit it considering the caliber of the other work on this site. But what the hell, I did it anyway. I did all the music, vocals and mixing. Keep in mind I am a beginner and my stuff can only get better. Especially learning from what I am hearing on this site.Lyrics:
I am a man and I have my prideMy strength like a sword strapped onto my side I hold my head high and thrust out my chest Whatever I do I always give it my best But I fell on my face because I could not see That a big part of me was soon going to leave Now only in sleep will it visit me Chorus What cannot be seen, I feel inside a dream I try so desperately, to bring it back with me But emptiness is all I have when I leave Consciousness brings with it the daily chore Of trying to find what I had once before Thoughts of an end that would redefine me Haven't yet seemed to be just what I seek The world looks so different and I don't know why I cannot refocus any way that I try But a dream does heal my damaged eye Chorus I can hold a stone in the palm of my hand Run my fingers through white grains of sand But what I seek cannot be grabbed with skin It must decide on its own to return back within I'm left to my chore until the night I greet Close my eyes and wait to be complete Sleep please come and set me free Chorus Hardware:
Ibanez RG321 guitarM-Audio mobile pre interface G5 2ghz dual core Software:
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You must be registered and logged-in to comment. Evolution &mdash 06/22/06 - 08:55:19 AM
Evolution &mdash 06/22/06 - 11:49:48 AM
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drive and punch-overall not bad at all-looking forward to hearing you
develop.
-Godchaser
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