You've got a great voice for dance pop. This song is pretty A-OK too.

Now about the arrangement.....

There are things I like. First of all, the background vocals are great.
There are touches like that guitar and the bass sound that I really like
too.

But those drums. They are really annoying, and I'm not sure that they
are appropriate for this song. Your voice has a healthy dose of
emotion, and these drums are too mechanical. They sound like they
belong to an entirely different song.

I'll take a peek at your other songs. I'm intrigued.

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hi!

thanks for your comments..I really appreciate them..hope you like the other songs..cheers:)

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Dramatic unique production, reminds me of Poe at her best, with a great
beat and some unpredictable moments (I especially dig that cool bridge
that modulates into new places). Bass could have punched more,
especially in the second half. I think you over-compress these mp3 files
making them sound more metallic, less warm than your studio version
must. Consider redoing the mp3 using the highest quality compression.
And consider putting up your lyrics and a photo. Definitely more photos
of you would be great. I really dig how you bring a latin pop thing to each
track but still push into new styles. Wonderful details.

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HI!

Thanks for your comments...it's great to get other people's take on this as it helps to form future songs and take things into consideration

Cheers!

Mitra

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Overall, this sounds great, tho' I do agree the drums can get a little too
much. The overall feel to this, and the details and breaks, sound really
professional, and ready for your chosen demographic.
But .. personally, i'm not sure that the chorus is quite up to scratch on
this, and I really don't like the 'have I gone blind' line (maybe it's got too
mnaty, er, overtones to it, you know.... you'll go blind if you keep doing
that).

Overall, i love the big sense of drama and emotion you put into your
tracks - you do have something very unique here.

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Thanks for your comments - it's all good and much appreciated!

Cheers!

Mitra

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Mitra

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singin!

Like taking chances in the music here.

Thanks for sharing your wonderfull music!

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I agree about the drums being a little overbearing but more to me was the voice chorus echoes which seemed to shrill and high pitched. I would rather have not had them. Otherwise I like it.

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I really like your voice. Have you done collaborations via the Internet? I
need a good woman's voice on some of my songs.

I like the Middle Eastern rhythm. Aggressive, then flowing. Awesome.

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hi!

thanks!

I've haven't done collaborations via the Internet but am up for having a go!

are all your songs on here for me to listen to?

Mitra

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Mitra

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Yep. My songs are all here.

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nice blend of electronica with the strings and acoustic guitar. supremely
interesting chorus changes and melody lines. really complex and soaring
at the same time. i'm normally not a huge fan of this style, but you have
created something to be taken seriously here. great job on mixing and
bringing elements in and out to create tension and release...this shows
your dynamic range as well...really excellent work.

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very much for your compliment..by the way, I really like your voice. It reminds me of another artist who plays here in the UK but she is from Oz - Sia...

your first song is lovely

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Great song and CHARMING vocal, your vocal is one of the bests i've heard at MacJams !!
Keep up the good work, and the guitar sounds great !

Take Care
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Yeman Auf AL-Rawi

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