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| 1rwhite1 said 1246 days ago (June 28th, 2006) | |
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Thands for the Advice Thanks, Parichayaka. It's funny, you know, because I have been wondering about using more strings in the middle, more full strings. And the idea of having a theme is also good advice. Thanks again and thanks for the review on my smooth jazz piece. Check out my latest song called Who We Are
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| psnjron said 1209 days ago (August 4th, 2006) | |
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Beautiful... This really captures the fall to winter feeling. That first cold breeze across your face to let you know. I could have taken it if it was a tad longer RpGreat job! Rp Check out my latest song called killer caterpillar
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| 1rwhite1 said 1209 days ago (August 5th, 2006) | |
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Beautiful... Thanks for listening. This is a work in progress. I've had little time to work on it lately, but I hope to finish it soon. Thanks again. Check out my latest song called Who We Are
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| Magritte said 895 days ago (June 14th, 2007) | |
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I miss autumn My favorite season, and this piece makes me think of what it's like when the weather and the leaves just start to turn. I kept waiting for the strings to come in and take this theme to its peak, although I'm not sure I would go with a harp (doesn't quite fit with the season and the tune, to my ears anyway). That's where I would see this going, where a bed of strings suddenly swells and takes over the piece to its finish, like how a light breeze will get the leaves of an autumn forest moving before the wind really swoops in and everything is swaying. Check out my latest song called Tango Macabre
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Parichayaka
You have a good start for a very nice soundtrack here. The piano playing is expressive. Harp and panflute (?) work wonderfully with the piano and the strings seem to add just the right flavor for a expansive and inspiring piece.
I would suggest to find a melody or theme which resonates with your idea for the soundtrack and develop it. Here are my thoughts when listening to your draft. I would start with the piano, have the harp come in to embellish and add the strings to add drama once the theme is established (needless to say a "non-linear" approach will work just as well, but keep in mind that without a connecting theme it's easy to loose focus". The individual instruments sound georgous the way you use them, sounds like you have a very good ear for that, but I would introduce them slowly and build up gradually. It's important to have a theme to built up on, of course, and with the ground work being done here, you can really get started. Wow this is a wordy comment! There are lots of people on this site who could probably give you much better advice here (check out Cameron, ComposerClark's work) but I really liked what I heard and am looking forward to hearing where you go with this piece! Good luck!