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This is a song about my Mother. She has Multiple Sclerosis and I often find it hard to remember her healthy. These are my memories...
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Lyrics
Intro
Sometimes, there are glimpses of
Mere glimpses
Sometimes, there are glimpses of
Mere glimpses
Verses
It could be
The curl in your hair
It could be
The shape of your hands
With the ring
On your finger
Or it could be
The smell of your clothes
Bounce and swim
Through the tides
Or it could be
The rappity-tap of telephone cords
A swamp
With many pillows
Chorus
Oh, we were just
Innocent faces
With innocent minds
Oh, we were just
Under false tenses
With false reprieve
Oh, we were just
Wrapped up in laces
With smiles and sharp cries
Oh, we were just
Small and dependant
With wide, open eyes
Repeat Intro
Sometimes, there are glimpses of
Mere glimpses
Sometimes, there are glimpses of
Mere glimpses
Verses
It could be
The curl in your hair
It could be
The shape of your hands
With the ring
On your finger
Or it could be
The smell of your clothes
Bounce and swim
Through the tides
Or it could be
The rappity-tap of telephone cords
A swamp
With many pillows
Chorus
Oh, we were just
Innocent faces
With innocent minds
Oh, we were just
Under false tenses
With false reprieve
Oh, we were just
Wrapped up in laces
With smiles and sharp cries
Oh, we were just
Small and dependant
With wide, open eyes
Repeat Intro
Tiny_Man_Inside
This is pretty good work for your first posting here. It is a very touching song and you can hear the depth of emotion in the voice. The Performance is pretty good too.
A couple minor critiques: the recording level seems a little bit low - I know this is probably mostly a function of the fact that your MAudio interface isnt' working. There are a lot of little pops and hisses in there, but again these can be resolved with a good interface. I like the melody of the solos in the intro and the outro, but I think the sound is a bit "computerish". I'm not sure what soft synth you are using for your midi, but IMO this would sound really nice played on an acoustic guitar with a bit of reverb.
Overall a very nice first effort though. Congrats and welcome to the MacJams family.
Mason