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The One by stuck2mojo [Email]
Genre: Hard Rock

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Hits: 525
Comments: 5
Votes: 2
Plays: 100
Last Played: Oct 08, 2008 - 10:58:12 PM
Downloads: 17
Fans: 0
Uploaded: Jun 28, 2006 - 08:35:08 PM
Last Updated: Jun 28, 2006 - 08:35:08 PM
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Keywords:
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Description:
My second full song. I feel it is a better effort overall than my first one, but I still have a good way to go. I decided to try my own drums on this one. I'm not much of a drummer yet so that would account for the simplicity. Anyway, I know doing this one will help my next one. Thanx for checking it out.

Lyrics:
I'm the one who brought the seed
And I'm the one that you most need

You know I will be there every day
I show that from me all is made
Still no acknowledgment from all is paid
For printed lore me you would trade

Im the one
I give you life 'til I'm through
I'm the one
I will ask nothing from you

I'm the one who brought the seed
And I'm the one that you most need

I pull together all that you do see
My will puts everything in harmony
You can't escape the force applied by me
I am the voice
I've made my decree

Im the one
I give you life 'til I'm through
I'm the one
I will ask nothing from you

Im the one
I give you life 'til I'm through
I'm the one
I will ask nothing from you


Hardware:
my Ibanez,my mobile pre and my G5

Software:
GarageBand 2
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Nice Job &mdash 06/29/06 - 09:48:06 AM
This one sounds pretty good. I like the mix, but sometimes I think the
vocals might have too much reverb on them and it can make them a bit
hard to hear. Overall though I like it. And good job on the drumming too.

Dave

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Nice Job &mdash 06/29/06 - 10:42:12 AM
Thanx for listening and commenting. I agree with you on the vocals. I am going
to fix that. I am also happy to know you liked the drums. I should be able to add
some other fills next project. Once again, I totally appreciate the feedback as it
will help me develop. Hope you check out my future posts!

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TT

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All the ingredients are there.... &mdash 06/29/06 - 08:04:23 PM
Now for the perfect mix.....

The vocals are too far in the back and the guitar a bit too far in front. The
tambourine is louder than the drum in a couple of places. And I think your
guitar is rushing the beat.

But hey, you have all the pieces, it's only a matter of adjusting the mix a
bit.


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All the ingredients are there.... &mdash 06/29/06 - 10:30:28 PM
Thank you for checking out my song. I need to hear from as many people as
possible. Everybody's opinion matters to me. I struggled with deciding how to
best present everything in the mix so I am glad to hear more feedback on it.
Also, thanx for the guitar critique. Once again, an outside opinion is great for
my development as a player and song writer. Hope to hear from you after my
next post.

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TT

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dont let this &mdash 08/24/08 - 04:18:58 AM
song go, you have to remix this, at the moment it is a bit all over the place, but it is a great tune...rework it and iron out all the blips.

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