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tormented by teptep [Email]
Genre: A Cappella

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Last Played: Feb 02, 2008 - 04:54:13 AM
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Uploaded: Jun 30, 2006 - 12:33:41 PM
Last Updated: Jun 30, 2006 - 12:33:41 PM
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Description:
just another melody that stims from some inner feelings of life. and this time I did nothing with it. so it is just clean

Lyrics:
I seem to be lost,
tormented in thought.
It screams and it shouts,
it tries to get out.
A voice in the dark
two souls that will part.
A ying and a yang
riped apart by the pain.
I'm gone but I'm here,
dispite all the fear.
I'm tormented you see,
in the thoughts that are free.

so I seem to be lost,
tormented in thought.
It screams and it shouts,
it tries to get out.
A voice in the dark
two souls that will part.
A ying and a yang
riped apart by this pain.
I'm gone but I'm here,
dispite all the fear.
I'm tormented you see,
in the thoughts that are free.
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Melancholic &mdash 06/30/06 - 12:50:15 PM
Great lyrics Will. Full of sadness. Unless the lack of instruments, you are building a style of your own. Becomes very recognisable. Vocal poetry like I said before. There's no doubt that you have a good singing voice. I really hope one day you get the chance to embellish your songs with instruments. It's worth it.

Keep well!
Walter

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Melancholic &mdash 06/30/06 - 12:54:21 PM
well as for instraments, I am no good with that, I am fine coming up with some thing on its own but getting it to match is to much trouble for me, gives me a headache and frustrates me to no end. I do like to sing though.

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create, remake, re-use

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good man &mdash 06/30/06 - 12:54:33 PM
Like your sound poetry. You have a good voice.. Keep it up

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I LIKE IT! &mdash 06/30/06 - 03:28:35 PM
Would go better with music tho. Perhaps you could collaborate with one
of the fine musicians here on the site....I like the words and your voice
could soar with a little backing....Peace, Norman

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good idea &mdash 07/03/06 - 01:15:20 PM
you should ezpand on it a bit more....but this seems like a good skeleton
to start with....brave of you to put it out so raw and dry....I think that is
cool....Peace....Ian

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another great song Will... &mdash 12/22/06 - 09:55:19 PM
...you have a knack for song writing, of which I am extremely envious of, let alone a fine singing voice, of which I am also envious...!
Well Done!


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nice melody &mdash 02/19/07 - 10:57:41 PM
this is nice. the lyrics are thoughtful, and the melody suits it well. wish it were longer!

cheers,
-=ez

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