This is the first song of yours I have listened to, and I am impressed by
your tone and intonation. Your delivery is very hearyfelt. And you
make a very simple melody into a substantial piece of music. My only
suggestion is that you resolve the ending a little better. You end on
the third and the fifth, and it leaves the listener wondering if there's
more. But maybe that's what you were going for, so good on ya!

As far as the mix goes, I would definitely suggest you ease off of the
reverb, or get a better sounding reverb. I use Ambience, it's a
donation-ware plug-in that gives me great reverb. The built-in reverb
is good too, but make sure you use enough dry mix to let your tone
come through.

Anyways, I am being picky. Experiment and don't stop recording!
Keep sharing your gift!

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Unbelievable beautiful.

clear like crystal.
sky near the space.
pure of taint voice.

I feel transparent beauty.


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this is the first song I learned in English at my little brother's funeral when I was 9 y/o. It will always be dear to me and your voice made it sound wonderful.

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