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Simple Melody (v1.0)


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My second song attempt for MacJams. I wrote the melody, chords, first verse and chorus on July 7, 2006. I added a second verse later. I think it needs a bridge, I'm still working on that.
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Lyrics
simple melody
written on your heart
have you made it sing
since we've been apart

simple melody
part of my life's song
can you hold it near
keep it for so long

remembering the tears
etched upon your heart
my simple melody
it's a permanent part

simple melody
part of my life's song
can you hold it near
keep it for so long
Song Stats
Hits: 980
Comments: 8
Fans: 1
Plays: 285
Downloads: 50
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Jul 11, 2006 - 10:58:57 PM
Last Updated: Jul 11, 2006 - 11:05:12 PM Last Played: May 15, 2008 - 12:46:45 PM
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Hardware:
Mac G5
Yamaha Silent Acoustic
M-Audio Keystation 49e
M-Audio FireWire Solo
Behringer XM8500
Software:
GarageBand 2
Comments
Roxylee said 1232 days ago (July 12th, 2006)
Very pretty...
Yes, simply peaceful & pretty. I'm glad i discovered your page!
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sdgreen said 1232 days ago (July 12th, 2006)
Very pretty...
Thank you so much! It is great to get feedback.
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ktb said 1231 days ago (July 13th, 2006)
great start
wow, I love this. You have a great ear for melody and the backing
tracks sound great. Your voice is expressive and soulful. Indeed, a very
peaceful overall feel
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TalktoWind said 1231 days ago (July 13th, 2006)
Good...
very good. A tune really ok. Maybe you have to work about the voice track. It has "hiss" effect maybe for very high frequency. By the way a nice song.
Rob
8-7-8-8
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Scott Carmichael said 1231 days ago (July 13th, 2006)
the whole thing really works together
This is one of those pieces where all the sum is greater than the parts..
the casual simplicity is so right for the content, but somehow the lyric,
music and melody work together to transend... my ears would usually
want a bridge, but that might detract from what you have created
here...

very memorable post
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Scott Carmichael said 1231 days ago (July 13th, 2006)
the whole thing really works together
This is one of those pieces where all the sum is greater than the parts..
the casual simplicity is so right for the content, but somehow the lyric,
music and melody work together to transend... my ears would usually
want a bridge, but that might detract from what you have created
here...

very memorable post
Check out my latest song called Good Morning
sdgreen said 1209 days ago (August 4th, 2006)
Thank you
Thanks everyone for the nice comments, they are much appreciated.

I'm just starting out with trying to write my own music, so encouragement is good!
Check out my latest song called Ever Solitude
midiman said 1131 days ago (October 22nd, 2006)
Beautiful
I love your simple melody-- the "flute" part is haunting and memorable.
Looking forward to hearing more!
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