I like the influense's you mentioned. This is a song in progress, good mix and production




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i listend to the three songs, this one is from the beginning to the end a
straight, forward song...

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sounds like you are playing "behind" the beat a bit. While it's interesting, I think it needs a little more direction. The changes are incremental and therefore there is a lot of repetition in the song. I guess vocals would make it less so, but I think you should at least throw in a guitar or bass solo to break things up and change the arrangement. The major break/change in the song doesn't come until almost the very end. I think it would be more effective if you used it earlier in the song.

Some good things going on here, but I'd like to hear more.

Mason

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Some interesting things going on here but the execution does not
sound as polished as I would expect from someone with a backgound
as deep as yours. Hope you take this in the spirit in which it was
offered ... as a friendly suggestion. :-)

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thanx for all the comments and suggestions so far. This and my other
tracks posted here are all works-in-progress, sketches for a potential
cd by the end of this year. This particular track has three seperate
parts. I wanted to give the first part air to breathe, let the riffs shift
slightly here and there. The second part has a lot of interesting stereo
interplay, and the final is meant to come out of nowhere, just as
sudden as the extinction of the "lizards" the song is a tribute to.

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