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| Wildcat said 1229 days ago (July 16th, 2006) | |
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thats the one... i listend to the three songs, this one is from the beginning to the end a straight, forward song... Check out my latest song called Somewhere in No Man´s Land
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| Tiny_Man_Inside said 1228 days ago (July 16th, 2006) | |
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busy sounds like you are playing "behind" the beat a bit. While it's interesting, I think it needs a little more direction. The changes are incremental and therefore there is a lot of repetition in the song. I guess vocals would make it less so, but I think you should at least throw in a guitar or bass solo to break things up and change the arrangement. The major break/change in the song doesn't come until almost the very end. I think it would be more effective if you used it earlier in the song. Some good things going on here, but I'd like to hear more. Mason Check out my latest song called Left to Swing (w/ The Composer)
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| announcer said 1226 days ago (July 18th, 2006) | |
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needs some work Some interesting things going on here but the execution does not sound as polished as I would expect from someone with a backgound as deep as yours. Hope you take this in the spirit in which it was offered ... as a friendly suggestion. :-) Check out my latest song called It Was a Dark and Stormy Night
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| Lpd42 said 1219 days ago (July 26th, 2006) | |
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Hello all! thanx for all the comments and suggestions so far. This and my other tracks posted here are all works-in-progress, sketches for a potential cd by the end of this year. This particular track has three seperate parts. I wanted to give the first part air to breathe, let the riffs shift slightly here and there. The second part has a lot of interesting stereo interplay, and the final is meant to come out of nowhere, just as sudden as the extinction of the "lizards" the song is a tribute to. Check out my latest song called The Faries Stay Close To Me
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vbluesky
I like the influense's you mentioned. This is a song in progress, good mix and production