wow. lots of various sounds here! i like in the beginning the mix of a
few different tempos on the beat, it does settle down to one main beat
after that tho. it might be cool to do that a few more times throughout
the song. (unless i missed it.) there seem to be several non-12-tone
tuned notes in here, that works pretty well.

just one little negative comment: it doesn't feel like there is a structure
to the overall piece. if some themes came back in different forms, that
would help. (unless, again, i missed it.) doing this would also help you
create an ending that feels like an ending. it just seems to sort of stop.

but, i love all the sounds. very nice. thanks!

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says it, very good production, I like this jam

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