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though i am still having trouble speaking...the other night i tried to do a poem. i am very hesitant about how my mouth works and sounds now. i think its not the same at all..and its frustrating. so here is my poem of love and distance. its simply my voice and piano.
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Uploaded: Jul 15, 2006 - 07:33:54 PM
Last Updated: Jul 15, 2006 - 07:33:54 PM Last Played: Jan 29, 2017 - 05:19:45 PM
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drakonis said 4143 days ago (July 15th, 2006)
across a timeless sea
As always, your words stir latent passions... beautifully delivered, sparse,
poignant, and powerful. As always, a great poet.

My thoughts are with you, and wish you smiles on your path.

ttfn,
Drakonis

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said 4143 days ago (July 15th, 2006)
Wow!
What a profoundly human piece of poetry. Nice delivery too! Thanks for
this.


Well wishes freind!
chikoppi said 4143 days ago (July 15th, 2006)
Words, deep and wide
Your mouth works and sounds far better than most, as ever. Very
natural reading. Very close. Wonderful, evocative words. The
sparseness of the piano is excellent.

P.S. Whatever happened to "You Got to Move?" That's one of my
favorite tracks from you, but I see its no longer on your song list.
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thoddi said 4141 days ago (July 18th, 2006)
beautiful
Some people have such a gift with words. I'm so impressed with how you paint beautiful images in my head just by such a short beautiful story.

It's a treat to see your name pop up among my mails from favorite macjammers. And it certainly was no disappointment to listen to your work of art. You must be a wise man Mr. gudkarma.

Your voice sounds very well, and expressed this poem very heartfelt and true.

Thank you for sharing.
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stacey said 4126 days ago (August 1st, 2006)
Wonderful!
Hi there. If you hadn't mentioned it, I would not have noticed anything
amiss with your voice. I don't know the story, or what happened, but all I
can say is that this is so beautiful!
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amesslam.org said 4082 days ago (September 15th, 2006)
Still nice
You're right, you're missing your previous resonance, but you are still so
far above what others can do with their voices you should not hesitate to
post!

Your worst is better than my best.
amesslam.org said 4082 days ago (September 15th, 2006)
Still nice
You're right, you're missing your previous resonance, but you are still so
far above what others can do with their voices you should not hesitate to
post!

Your worst is better than my best.
shirtless said 3567 days ago (February 11th, 2008)
Good job
Hi,
Very mushy, but the way you read it gets to me - great voice. Some nice poetic lines and great match with the piano. Thanks for posting it.
regards,
shirtless
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