Improvement. Clarity. Sometimes simple is better. Here is a great sample
of. Song is more calming. I liked it before...now it's awesome. BD...I don't
know where this comes from, but keeping tapping it. Great stuff. RP

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thanks!

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-B

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Smoother, more angelic, like sadness floating up thru the ceiling of
expectation and worry. Great pop ballad.

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Haven't heard the previous version, but I really like this one!

Beautiful!

-E

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The pacing is great Brian. The tune, like much of your work, is very
memorable. It sticks with you and works it's way into your brain. Good
stuff.

I think someone in the previous version mentioned the cymbal crashes
and midi, while I would disagree about the midi part, what I think you're
after is a cymbal swell to a crash. Very dramatic. Maybe you could try
that out.

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By definition a waltz is in some for of triple time... 3/4 for instance. This
is in 4/4. Still a nice piece.

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it is? i thought it was 3/4! Oh well, too late to change the title!

B

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This is really a great tune! I love your voice. I have had the pleasure of listening to several of your tunes today and you are extremely talented. Wow...thanks for sharing your music. I enjoy it very much!

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thank you very much. you're very kind.






















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