nice heavy guitars. sadly the headphone jack is screwed and won't let me hear the vocals, but like the instrumental part.

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Nice peice of riffology. I'm not that familiar with the conventions of emo, being more of a Rammstein, Nile kind of guy, but I enjoyed this. The vocals need some work on the recording levels, the growling bits keep fading out. Nice work.

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The guitar tone is a little too unrefined and digital for my taste, the screming is really weird, but the way that you produced your vocals makes them sound really good, better than other times I've heard you sing.

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Your instrumental was dead on as far as some of the harder emo I've heard. Great job.

My main advice would be to commit to your screams. Really belt it out. Then you can process it to your liking. This sounds more like you spoke it and then processed it to give it some grit. Does that make sense?

Keep em coming!

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