Nice stuff you two... this is a fun "party-at-the-beach" tune... and
Wildcat's wafting poetry is mesmerizing. I've lived near the ocean all my
life, and I am in love with it. The ocean sound effects were good, but I
think at the beginning the ocean noise is too loud for too long... it
interferes with the music and voice. Maybe it should soften quickly, but
remain in the background for a while. Essen? I know it is a big city, but it
would be funny if you knew my friend Thorsten Froelich, who lives there.
He and I worked on a free Mac 3D software team years ago (http://
mac.povray.org). Anyway, nice use of loops!
ttfn,
Drakonis

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Vielen Dank :)
Many thanks for your comment :)
I 'll keep your words in mind for the next remix (missed a second acoustic guitar
anyway).
I do not know your friend - so far.
Glad to hear you like our work - do you understand any of those words ?

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Ich Werstehe ein bisschen... with a name like "Eduard Schwan", I decided I should
learn some German. But that was a High School class, many many years ago, so
I have forgotten most of it. I went to Germany on vacation a couple years ago
(M:unchen, Rothenberg ob der Tauber, Hohenschwangau). German is a very
interesting language to learn and listen to. The famous American writer and
satirist "Mark Twain" had many funny quotes, one of which I found painfully true
during German Finals: "Life is too short to learn German."
ttfn,
Drakonis (Drache)


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I see - yes german is not that easy.
The funny thing about the lyrics: we tried some english words - but I put them
into Babelfish-translation.
Sent the "text" back to Wildcat - she read it and so our songtext was born :)

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what she was saying/singing but it sounded nice in my headphones.
Like what your doing - Keep up the good work.


mvh : )

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:) I can imagine you did not understand a word :D
Therefore I also published the english text.
Thank you for your kind words.
Makes me happy to hear you like it.
I'll keep on trying :)

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I love wildcat voice... She brings a new soul to this song. Maybe put her vox up in the mix. Good job you to.. Really like this tune... I don't understand a word of what she says but is catchy to listen to... Sexy voice

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Thanks craft !
It will be in the next remix !
(The lyrics are there in english.)

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Like i suggested in an other comment, we reached with adding vocals
more agility to the Loops. Your soundcreation is getting better in every
try.
I like this wafting charakter you did with my Vocallines, but i personally
prefer a human charakter of voices. Its also a bit overloaded in some
parts.There is for my opinion to much effect on my voice, sounds a bit
tinny. For a balance to the sound i would prefer the calmness
vocalparts i sended you.(In the end of the song i recorded them clearly,
and this part i liked mostly, i could not hear in this mix)
But i was a pleasure to do this collab. I had fun with this strange
translation. And remember , i gave you only this fast recorded lines
with bad quality , so you mixed this very well. Thanks for Collaborating
with me.

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Wildcat this is exactly what I expected.
I told you I only used 3 of 4 lines.
But the next remix is ready to be published.
The change to your voice is very little - I made them only fit a bit more to the
sound.
I think you will like the next one better :)

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I love the layers and textures. The nature sounds need to be brought
down a bit in the mix. Very trippy. I don't find it dreamy and relaxing. I
find it exciting and rather urgent. It made me think of deep sea fishing
with a small boat chasing a monstrous fish on a line.

German poetry doesn't exactly melt my heart but the vocals sound cool
within your musical landscape.

Enjoyed it much.

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Thank you Cipher !-)
I am pleased to hear you enjoyed it - even you did not understand the words.
Ok - I will bring the next version soon :)


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Cool instrumental grooves. Wildcat's vox is very effective. The German
made it all the more interesting to me, but thanks for the translation.

Be well!

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Thank you for your kind words Mike - I appreciate it very much !

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Not your every day at the beach. The vocals were great, but sometimes
seemed a little buried in the mix. Was of any of this played?
irrespective its a phat assembledge of sonic hipness. I feel I need to
listen wearing shades

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Thank you John !
Did you try the final mix ?
(The link is up there!)
{All made of loops and Wildcats voice.}

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