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Where Do We Go? by antonfosh [Email]

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Last Played: Oct 10, 2008 - 10:41:56 AM
Downloads: 50
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Uploaded: Aug 06, 2006 - 04:11:50 PM
Last Updated: Aug 06, 2006 - 04:11:50 PM
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Description:
Unfortunately I don't play guitar, but I love the acoustic guitar sound, so for now, it's the midi guitar from Garageband...

Lyrics:
Look me right in the eye,
What do you see? What do you see?
You’re trying to make me blind
When you’re looking at me, looking at me….
You tell me I am all that you want now
That you will never let me go, but I know

You can tell me you want me so much but I know that you’re lying
Empty words that just pour from your mouth, what’s the point in denying?
You tell me now that we’ll be ok, give it one more chance, give it one more day
Then where do we go, where do we go?

Tell me tell me your name
Once again, once again
Can’t you see that you’ve changed?
Like a clear sky to rain, clear sky to rain
It feels like we are running away
From all the real things that we should say, every day

I can tell you I want you so much but I know, I’d be lying
Empty words that just pour from my mouth, what’s the point in denying?
I tell you now that we’ll be ok, give it one more chance, give it one more day
Where do we go, where do we go?

We can say that we want it so much, but it’s true, we’d be lying
Empty words would just fall to the ground, what’s the point in denying?
We could say that we’ll be ok, that we can get back to yesterday
So where do we go, where do we go?


Hardware:
Midi Digital Piano, Powerbook G4, External Mic

Software:
Garageband
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Well done! &mdash 08/06/06 - 09:28:47 PM
Love the groove of this song... Really wanted to hear dome mello drums and bass kick in on the second half (but hey, I'm a bass player!) The acoustic guitar sound is effective. With those software instruments you either have to approach the keys with a guitar technique and voicing or go the other way and make it totally different. Otherwise it sounds kind of fake. Some of your licks did a real good job of mimicking the acoustic. It'll get better with experimentation.

Awesome songwriting!

Mike T.

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Solid &mdash 08/07/06 - 10:42:54 AM
Really solid writing. Your vocals capture the emotion and rhythmic
potential of your soaring pop melodies. I dig the nice electric piano too.
Until you can replace the midi guitar with a real player, tho, the track will
only sound like a demo. If you can't get a collaborator, consider redoing
the tune using sounds that you can make sound real, like piano, organ,
synths. Again, really nice writing and vocals.

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nice song &mdash 08/07/06 - 05:49:51 PM
The song is very catchy so as the lyrics. Try to play some other instruments in this song (violins, synths, pads, drums, etc) and you will have a #1 for shure. Great job...

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Wonderful &mdash 08/10/06 - 02:46:59 PM
You're a gifted songwriter, boy! Very great performance on all levels. You sang this song with a lot of pathos, and I really dig your voice. Yes, this track could use some extra instruments, like a bass or some background violins, but what the hell, these are just some little nits, and overall this is a splendid song with a great soul.

Walter

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SWEEET DIDDIES! &mdash 08/10/06 - 03:18:53 PM
Man this is a nice song! LOve the arrangement but you need a real guitar on this! It would totally set it off! Keep writing this is great!

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Great Tune!! &mdash 08/11/06 - 07:21:57 AM
Sounded real too me....Great writting and the voicing is just great. I like
the electric piano sound. I think the sound and song are great the way
they are

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I agree with the others .... &mdash 08/16/06 - 09:27:25 PM
This is a great song and is worthy of some real instrumentation ...... and sounds like you might have a few offers (???) ..... your voice is original sounding and totally captures the mood of the song ! Nice job on the harmonies and vocal mixing ... I especially liked some of the effects added on the vocals about 3/4 of the way through the song. Almost forgot I wasnt listening to the radio.

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Bravo &mdash 03/10/07 - 09:41:52 PM
wow, what a talent. you have the songcraft. The writing and arrangement is fabulous. If you have midi files I might be able to re-record the guitar midi part with a rythymic synth sound. This is great.


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