A pretty nice, full, warm sound you have here. The only production tip I
could give you at the moment (based solely on my personal opinion, of
course) is to increase the volume of the vocals. I can barely hear what
you're saying in this. Otherwise the production sounds pretty good.
The song itself, though, gets repeatitive.
Maybe cut one (maybe two) of the verses and add a little bridge of
some sort. I don't really know :P

Anyway - to sum things up:
Sounds nice, but goes for too long without changing.

-E

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reminds me of McCartney when he was doing solo stuff playing all the
instruments himself. Nice tune. 2nd the vote of bringing up the vocals
and maybe adding/swapping bridge for verse. listening did make me
forget all about the bad mood i was in this am, so thanks for the smile.

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reminds me of McCartney when he was doing solo stuff playing all the
instruments himself. Nice tune. 2nd the vote of bringing up the vocals
and maybe adding/swapping bridge for verse. listening did make me
forget all about the bad mood i was in this am, so thanks for the smile.

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Like your vox on this one. Seems tight. I cannot understand the lyrics (maybe put it up in the mix).. Some more changes will help a lot in the final mix.. But I'm digging it.. Good job

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Thats because there still isnt any lyrics...hahahaha

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Great job, Steve! I especially like the vocal harmonies, and the song itself floats smoothly his way from start to end. I always prefer a solid song over a perfect production, so these little production nits don't really bother me. You did great here!

Walter

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This is definitely like an updated kind of McCartney vibe. I can almost
see him doing that wiggly head thing he does. The song is really nice,
fun to listen to, well-written. Add my name to the list of people asking
for a louder-clearer vocal, but other than that, I think it's solid.

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This has a nice low fi DIY feel....good melody and a performance full of
charm. Perfect listening for a lazy Sunday afternoon
Steve

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Great little pop ditty....real great tones that fit very well with the
song....almosy bubbly and silly with a sense of unrivaled cool....this is a
tune for the hepcats....nice work on this jangle pop gem....big thumbs
up!!!!

peace....Ian Baird

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Great little pop ditty....real great tones that fit very well with the
song....almosy bubbly and silly with a sense of unrivaled cool....this is a
tune for the hepcats....nice work on this jangle pop gem....big thumbs
up!!!!

peace....Ian Baird

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wow..thanks ......Thats what I shot for...thanks

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a beatle feel I love the bass excellent playing nice singing great lead also 10 thumbs up very great

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nice vocal performance here. I wish your vox were a little louder. The
guitar work is quite impressive. Don't be shy about that voice of yours.
Nice subtle harmonies.

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keeps repeating even after the track is finished..
which proves that you are a craftsman who makes a delicate, indulgent structure of notes that will carve into listeners minds over their ears
which also means.. you have one of the best qualities to become a producer!

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oh yeah! in terms of creative quality the song reminded me of neil young and yo la tengo. I love the vocals not too in the front... thanks for sharing. the solo tone is great!!

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