I like the suspense. But I think that it is too short. I know how it is hard
to make songs longer, but i think it would benifit from more time added
to it. Great song.

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As I stair at the pic I see him moving and smile as he reaches the other side,good production and sounds, as a film maker do you have any YouTube / Google video accounts that you post to. if you do send me a video share of your work...thanks 4 the jam

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Nice use of percussive effect to create tension. I like the bass line
about 2/3 of the way through the piece...would love to hear you
expand and deepen that bass with a few more ominous chord
progressions underneath your percussive, staccato bursts. Certainly
captures the scene and creates a moment of tension and perhaps
indecision...

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