I actually like the vocals...not bad at all. Has a different sound, folky and
blues mix with a little vox mix up. The guitar seems a bit out of place
coming in that hard though. Almost expected more of a jammin
acoustical sound. Overall I like it!

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great feel and emotion coming through ..balanced well by the
moody picked guitar part. Vocal backing/harmonies are
excellently done, nicely mixed.

A touch of the Chili Peppers in the vocal, but not too much.

I wonder if there was some bouncing track trouble as to my ears the
lead vocal line is sitting oddly a bit too much over to the left in the
mix, as is the crunchy guitar and fine solo.

What did you record with may I enquire out of curiousity?


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and cool, like the silky guitarwork, and the progression. the end has nice,
odd, drama.

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was very cool like the guitar work keep um coming

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This started out cool but when the distorted guitar came in you lost me! It was a bit incoherent? Otherwis cool vocal effect and the timing needs a little work!

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I agree that the distortion towards the end is either entirely innappropriate, or needs re-working.
this is a work in progress, and I will be sure to repost once I have polished it a bit more.

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Like your sketches. When the distorted guitar came in I was hoping it was going to cut loose into a blasting rocker, but that would have been expected. I was kept wanting. There is a level of anticipation in yur work, a longing, unfufilled. Nice harmonies and space.

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Your comments have thus far been kind and specific, a fresh breath of air compared to some of the other comments I've received.

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