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This is a song I wrote with the talented Jeff Bryant. It features Jeff on lead vocals.
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Lyrics
An islands dream on a mend
Another scene
The sun was younger then
Tried to sleep, up til dawn
Across the street
The lights read right from wrong
A 100 Mile Block
Wasn't what we thought
Tried to look both ways this time
Here's to when we lost and found
Younger then
We could see it now
A 100 Mile Block
Wasn't what we thought
Tried to look both ways this time
Promises were made
A whisper on the day
The things we need to say
Another scene
The sun was younger then
Tried to sleep, up til dawn
Across the street
The lights read right from wrong
A 100 Mile Block
Wasn't what we thought
Tried to look both ways this time
Here's to when we lost and found
Younger then
We could see it now
A 100 Mile Block
Wasn't what we thought
Tried to look both ways this time
Promises were made
A whisper on the day
The things we need to say
cjorgensen
Looks like Ashton Kutcher in the graphic. Just saying.
Think this song needs to be a bit faster. Just my opinion.
It's well sung, well done.
If it was on the radio I wouldn't change the dial, but wouldn't seek it
out to buy. The backdrop music would have gotten repetitive if it were
longer. As it is, it's fine. Just bear that in mind if expanding the cut.
A shake up somewhere along the line would be cool as well. A drop out
of vocals to focus on the music, more lyrics (the chorus is half the
song), and a change-up in timing, and I could find myself humming
this one tomorrow.
Thanks.