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| Electric Lobster said 1179 days ago (September 3rd, 2006) | |
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Nice track :) But is this Industruial ? I like it - some variation would make it even better :) Check out my latest song called Rain Rain [vox/ Linda Courtien]
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| cjorgensen said 1179 days ago (September 3rd, 2006) | |
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Odd start Starts out a bit dancey and a bit too electronic for my tastes. Once it gets going seem to far into place though, and you could say this is just an intro and to get people used to what's to come. It got a bit repetitive, but I prefer chaos to planned emotional jerks. I really like the vocal effects and the mix. I also like the keyboards toward the end. It has a nice overall blend. It feels a bit loopy for me, but that's my damage and bias, so won't hold it against you. A nice addition to macjams, and I can't wait to see what you're doing in a year. You've got a better start than I had! p.s. it ends a bit abruptly. You using the cycle tool? It's your friend. Check out my latest song called Gardens
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| DOCTORBIZARRE said 1178 days ago (September 4th, 2006) | |
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Not Bad I don't know how you created so i really can't say too much? It was a little repetitive but had some cool variations throughout! Man you've got a guitar! Play it! Throw some sick heavy riffs in there to break it up! Maybe a demented poem too! Add some Variety to this show and describe how the song was created for all I know you could just be using loops! Check out my latest song called STORM
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| apb said 1174 days ago (September 8th, 2006) | |
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I like it .. Fantastic 'into' that does build if a little slow for my somewhat impatient nature .. I think some more variation could be added. A mad guitar or little twiddle with something higher up might do it- something that screams like you woke from a nightmare ... pool of sweat .. that sort of thing .. you know .. lol I also thought you should have drums that have snare with the bass bop always, drop snare and bass bop out together and bring 'em back together .. hmm .. maybe.. ;o) second listen, sounds fine. .. the ascending bass note riff reminded me a bit of the theme tune to "The Equalizer" - old UK tv show, don't know if you ever got that in the States. Love the more squelchy bass that is in later on and it's blending with the other sounds. Check out my latest song called Misplaced
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| smokey bacon jnr said 1167 days ago (September 15th, 2006) | |
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heavy... I like it. Black sabbath meets the Aphex Twin in crack alley and gives him a good ass f*cking. Crying out for some screams or some death metal vocals in the background building to a climax. Excellent stuff. Check out my latest song called Hum
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| Hectorious said 1166 days ago (September 17th, 2006) | |
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I can so hear this in some crazy vampire werewolf movie. Cool changes and Killer groove ;0} Check out my latest song called Short Circuit (Sample)
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| Tiny_Man_Inside said 1163 days ago (September 19th, 2006) | |
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pretty decent a lot of good ideas in there, but I wish there was a bit more variance. it seems at the midway point you were just about to bust loose, but it didn't quite get over the hump, so to speak. I would like to have heard some rippin' guitar in there to really lay the smack down! Hammer it! cool effect on the vocals, reminded me of Brain Fog by Static X. Mason Check out my latest song called Left to Swing (w/ The Composer)
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| mcsweb said 1132 days ago (October 20th, 2006) | |
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Well, before I even start... I love your artwork! There's a mean bass that starts about a quarter the way in that finishes it's line with a nice unexpected note. Things build after that, but I keep waiting for things really go. By the time the voice sample comes in, the energy drops off a bit when I am hungry for it to go the other way. Then we lose our bass line and a new theme is introduced. I really love the crazy places the bass takes us. Ominous, and I guess I like OMINOUS. I'd like the hear the percussion more on top. It's almost completely buried. The bass is so cool that it's just about worth burying your percussion with it. Check out my latest song called Pearls of Perfection
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