Sounds good man. I love to hear other people writing and singing Christian music.

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Thanks Dadai for your encouragement!

Steve

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Thanks Bowens for your comments!

Steve

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for your comment on my song...

You have a very nice voice! (Perhaps I'll lend it to one of my songs, since I don't sing myself..:) One comment, which I think we should give each other, is I think you could make it longer, and perhaps turn the volume down on the voice-part, which is a bit stronger than everything else...

I'm new to this as well, so take my criticism with ease..:)

Guess you're right, I think was in a special mood that evening when I felt sad and happy at the same time to make music...

Keep it up!

/F

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It's a pleasure to hear from you - Thanks so much. You're right, the
voice is loud, and the song could be longer. I was also wondering if it
needed a chorus or somethong else What do you think? This is my first
full song in GB and I need more experience with mixing etc. I also only
have the built in mic on the mac at the moment so although the voice
is loud I was suprised at the quality of the mic itself. I have to learn in
the meantime how to mix and get the best out of what I have. I usually
play guitar (albeit very limited) so all this is a new venture for me. Your
help is very much appreciated. If you need my voice on anything please
let me know, I will have a try.
Thanks.
Steve
PS IF I can help with vocals

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Sung with deep feeling and a worshipful heart Steve. Very nice voice.
The only suggestion I would make is to practice some more on mixing
and also matching the percussion with the tempo.


God bless,

Rick

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Thanks Rick for your much valued comments, I will do as you suggest.

Thanks Again

Steve

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Very nice, and yes, a chorus would really make it special. Welcome to
MacJams and thank you for commenting on one of my songs. I'm
looking forward to hearing more songs from you. :-)

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Thanks for your encouragement. It's great to have constructive advice.
Thanks again.

Steve

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Your comments are appreciated, as your music. Hear the tips you get here from members, they will lead you to fine-tune your productions.

Thanks again,

. - Harold

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Thanks Harold for your time and valuable comments

Steve

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