back to the kitchen....now if you had some words to add this would be jammin, sounds good

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Someone gave you an overall 5.5 vote which is unjust. Its a good piece
but does need vocal or lead instrument of some type to flot over this
great backing track. I likes.

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At TGI Fridays, I still remember the blisters I'd get scooping out potatos to
make the potato skins (until I caught on wrapping the spoon with a towel
got rid of most of that blister problem) ....
Good production here, I especially like your use of horns.
I look forward to hearing you collaborating with a lyricist/rapper.

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Absolutely loved this piece..
I took it in another direction: http://www.macjams.com/song/24473



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Yeah this has a cool groove! FInd a cool rapper on here to flow on this and you'll be all set!

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Great creativity. Without words its very repetative. Needs lyrics in the style of R&B. The change of piano caught me off gaurd. Nice. The only thing I would change is to not bring back the melody and for the end of the song just end with the piano; the same way you started it.

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This one is on the money. I agree with everyone on the fact that it seems to be missing something. Can't quite put a finger on it. Even still two thumbs up.. prolly my fav on here other than my own of course ha

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oh man good trck but the pops make me laugh, and that first comment is hillarious, back to the kitchen mothafucka, it would be funny if this was another dining room track

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