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Description:
I never know what to put for genre, so I always put experimental. This song was written some years back when I felt like music had broken up with me. Nothing was working
Lyrics:
Once upon the end of a love story
One small world was drowned in it's misery
A dancer lost her feet and a writer lost his thoughts, a singer lost her voice and a sculptor lost his hands and a dancer lost his feet and a writer lost her thoughts a singer lost his voice and a sculptor lost her hands.
Long ago, a song began too beautiful
There it grew and there away it flew
A dancer lost her feet and a writer lost his thoughts, a singer lost her voice and a sculptor lost his hands and a dancer lost his feet and a writer lost her thoughts a singer lost his voice and a sculptor lost her hands.
And it slips from me like a rolling wave
And I cannot hold tightly
Once we held a song
Now I sing alone and it bruises so gently
A dancer lost her feet and a writer lost his thoughts, a singer lost her voice and a sculptor lost his hands and a dancer lost his feet and a writer lost her thoughts a singer lost his voice and a sculptor lost her hands.
And it slips from me like a rolling wave
And I cannot hold tightly
Once we held a song
Now I sing alone and it bruises so gently
Hardware:
Keyboard, iBook
Software:
Garageband
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Beautiful tune &mdash 09/19/06 - 07:42:23 AM
With a little taste of Mike Oldfield and you sounds like Maggie Reilly.
I only have a littel criticism the start! you can here noise and at the end
it's a noise...With a new Remix of this Lovely tune and I'm sure it's came to
be perfect.
Skean [ Reply to This ]
Lovely &mdash 09/23/06 - 11:20:47 AM
Joy, wow, this is so nice. There's a lot of depth in the arrangement.
There are a number of mix issues, but they don't take away from this
great song. I like all the vocal experiments your trying here. Great
texture, harmonies and doubles. Great lyrics, particularly in the chorus. [ Reply to This ]
WWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOW &mdash 02/06/07 - 05:15:52 AM
. . . . . .
....WHAT GGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT MUSIC . . . I : % : ) :0 can heardly believe it. . . : ) :0 ; ) :6
Speak of touching thy (MY!!)soul . . . . . THANKYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wish it was EVEN LONGER . . . I love everything about it the TEXT, MUSIC YOUR VOICE...Your voice is absolutely incredible.. what a gift to manhood: )10101010101010101011
(I'm no Musician so the technical details I truely can't say anything about..)
THANKS AGAIN
Lena [ Reply to This ]
: ) &mdash 02/06/07 - 05:19:10 AM
Nice &mdash 05/16/07 - 09:29:10 AM
A cool Tori Amos vibe. Really nice. There are a few distortions from overdriving the vocal track, consider a remix? [ Reply to This ]
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I only have a littel criticism the start! you can here noise and at the end
it's a noise...With a new Remix of this Lovely tune and I'm sure it's came to
be perfect.
Skean
[ Reply to This ]