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Keywords:
2Step (2), the (178), missing (11), genre (5)
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Description:
A little danceable tune not only for electrified crabs ..)
The new version:
Precious Waters (remix)
Lyrics:
Something in crabbish ;)
Hardware:
Mac mini
Software:
GB 3
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Nicely done &mdash 09/20/06 - 01:25:16 AM
good mix, tune: lacks one particular 'hook' or return part for me .. it
meanders a bit too much for my tastes. Lovely sounds all the same.
Only nit picks for me were: the finger-click was a bit loud (nice touch), the
sounds that fast panned got a bit tiring after a while and the crabs
seemed to be speaking frog .. but I would check with Skean for a second
opinion about that.
I think overall it is very good all the same and I wouldn't bother with
these things I mentioned. [ Reply to This ]
I agree &mdash 09/20/06 - 07:29:32 AM
But I like this sort of tunes....I think you can use one or 2 track more with beats
too have more rhythm and a little change in the tune....I often use 2 track when I
do drums and my break beats I use 3-7 some times maybe more.
Great tune.....but it can be better.
Kenta:) [ Reply to This ]
Thank you for your comment Kent(a) ! &mdash 09/20/06 - 08:47:04 AM
I think I have to go back into my little underwater studio cave ..)
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T.A.F.K.A.RoB*-) [ Reply to This ]
Thank you for listening Alan ! &mdash 09/20/06 - 08:44:07 AM
I appreciate your honest comment on my tune.
Skean hast added one too - I will keep your advice in mind for a remix :)
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T.A.F.K.A.RoB*-) [ Reply to This ]
Frutti di Mare &mdash 09/20/06 - 10:30:08 AM
Thank you for listening Tanja ! &mdash 09/20/06 - 11:12:39 AM
But still some spices and a final sauce missing ..)
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T.A.F.K.A.RoB*-) [ Reply to This ]
Not bad overall &mdash 09/20/06 - 05:22:07 PM
Not bad E/L, it's just not smooth - it has a sort of a disjointed feel to it. It
has some fun stuff, though. [ Reply to This ]
Thanks for your comment Matt ! &mdash 09/20/06 - 05:32:59 PM
I will do another version - hope you will like it more :)
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T.A.F.K.A.RoB*-) [ Reply to This ]
nice groove... &mdash 09/20/06 - 06:53:19 PM
...to it.
lots of variety and great effects. only one slight complaint: it seemed to
just kinda of bar hop through the coolest parts of of the city. but, perhaps
that what it is: a night on the town!
i like your new name too
thanks! [ Reply to This ]
Thank you very much Smokey ! &mdash 09/20/06 - 08:11:37 PM
I always appreciate your comments :)
Thank you for listening - I will try to make a better version of this now.
Where you have the feeling to stay in the new "Electric Blue Lobster" nightclub ;)
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T.A.F.K.A.RoB*-) [ Reply to This ]
Crabbish would work! &mdash 09/20/06 - 08:53:33 PM
Nice keys and sounds in general Robert. This would be great
soundtrack music - apb's "hook" comment makes sense - sounds like
it needs maybe a female voice (just talking maybe) to add a bit more
interest. Generally though I really like what you've done her. It
certainly moves along very well and has lots of interesting bits and
pieces.
Neil [ Reply to This ]
Thank you for your comment Neil ! &mdash 09/21/06 - 10:25:53 PM
Check the remix - to see if there are any improvements !-)
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T.A.F.K.A.RoB*-) [ Reply to This ]
! &mdash 09/21/06 - 03:37:03 PM
although i understand how others want this 'tightened', it plays to me
more like freeform fun. and with a piece based as tightly around the drum
and bass facet, you can so get away with it. it conjures up metropolitan
energy and improvisation, play and a kind of cool that makes me think of
beat, yet without the cheese. [ Reply to This ]
Thank you for listening Andrew ! &mdash 09/21/06 - 10:39:36 PM
I appreciate your words and putting me on your Fan list :)
Try the new version - link is up there !
I'm glad you like my stuff !
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T.A.F.K.A.RoB*-) [ Reply to This ]
hey man... &mdash 09/24/06 - 06:42:14 PM
.... you have some wicked breaks goin on here.... lovely pads.... and the upfront of the percussives just kicks ass.............. wonderful [ Reply to This ]
Thank you very much for listening Atonalis ! &mdash 09/25/06 - 03:35:30 PM
You should check out the remix (second version) - the link is up there !
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T.A.F.K.A.RoB*-) [ Reply to This ]
So HERE is where it happened... &mdash 09/30/06 - 01:55:22 PM
...the change of persona that is. Nice beat and bass groove. Interesting
textured effects. One suggestion (and I know this isn't easy with loops):
try a major change-up for the mid-section with a return to the main
theme for the outro. Still, very nice work.
Be well!
Crabs? http://www.macjams.com/song/24761 [ Reply to This ]
Thank you for listening Mike ! &mdash 09/30/06 - 02:13:32 PM
I tried to make a better version of this - and it won't be the last ..)
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T.A.F.K.A.RoB*-) [ Reply to This ]
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meanders a bit too much for my tastes. Lovely sounds all the same.
Only nit picks for me were: the finger-click was a bit loud (nice touch), the
sounds that fast panned got a bit tiring after a while and the crabs
seemed to be speaking frog .. but I would check with Skean for a second
opinion about that.
I think overall it is very good all the same and I wouldn't bother with
these things I mentioned.
[ Reply to This ]