First, you've got a great, great voice and guitar for the blues! That's pure, classic blues. I agree with tobin: your wailing is good, as a contrast with the gruff 'normal' voice.

On the other hand, this song would be improved by re-recording one more time. You were drumming occasionally. Because it wasn't regular, it sounds like 'knocks' in the music and unintentional. Either do the drumming more regularly (at least three times in a row) or choose not to drum.

Good job!

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my foot stomping or my percussive slide effect?

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yose the bluesman karma....

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What a voice man. What a feel. To every song, there is
something so distinctly GudKharma... I can't even tell ya. I
wish I could come up with something for you to
collaborate with me on... you've got such personality in
all your tracks. This one, in particular, sounds very
FINISHED. The production is right on (a little off, which,
for this sort of thing, IS right on), the performance is
great, and the lyrics are fantizzly fantazzable.

Just curious... not that your stuff sounds anything like
him... but ever read E. E. Cummings?

kindly kind,
mister fosod.

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