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invisible (4)
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Description:
Brand new song, i think it sounds a little slow in some parts. Comment and let me know wot u think, thanks
Lyrics:
She's running quickly
Towards me
Her arms outstretched
She's happy
But I don't
Don't see
There's someone else
That she's more glad
To see
Am I invisible
Am I invisible
Am I not visible
Is there nothing to see here
Trying to be seen
It's not something that's naturally
Easy
My words are still heard
Even though they may well not remain you might say
Have you ever
Felt like this
See through and no one
To miss
What breaks, breaks me
Could easily
Move on and choose
Choose quickly
Am I invisible
Am I invisible
Am I not visible
Is there nothing to see here
Trying to be seen
It's not something that's naturally
Easy
My words are still heard
Even though they may well not remain you might say
Hardware:
Epiphone G400, Line6 Spider2 212, eMac, Boss BR-8
Software:
Logic Express
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Nice! &mdash 09/29/06 - 11:19:46 AM
This sounds great! The production and musicianship is top notch, and
it's a good song. I can't find any faluts with it. Great job! [ Reply to This ]
wow &mdash 09/30/06 - 07:16:48 AM
thanks a lot for the comment! if you like this check out some of my other material too [ Reply to This ]
good rock tune &mdash 09/30/06 - 12:00:36 PM
solid playing. the lead guitar cut through really nice. one suggestion
during the chorus if you dropped the volume on the distorted guitar a
little bit so the background vocals would pop more. guitars and vocals
share the same frequencies so it's a hassle but the end results always
sounds more deep. great work and i've eyeing a epiphone g400 for a
while, i think you've convinced me. [ Reply to This ]
Rockin &mdash 11/01/06 - 03:59:52 PM
Hey Chuck - really nice production on this, a really good live sound and sweet guitar playing. I really like the keyboard part in the chorus. The voacl sounds a little flat in places (sounds a bit like Kedis in parts), but overall, nice work.
Steve [ Reply to This ]
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it's a good song. I can't find any faluts with it. Great job!
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