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Slow yet fast, calm and somewhat a journey.
its a work in progress.
its a work in progress.
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| B.J.C. said 1149 days ago (October 4th, 2006) | |
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Hi Vic thanks for the advice, the more the better. Check out my latest song called Talk To Me
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| stevewhit said 1149 days ago (October 4th, 2006) | |
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HI B.J.C. Hi Welcome!! This sounds good! I like the deep base sound that you get! - How did you achieve it? I also like your synth effects! - It will be good to hear some more - well done! Steve Check out my latest song called schooldays
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| Magritte said 1148 days ago (October 4th, 2006) | |
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I liked the journey. (Not Journey but journey.) I agree about the synth, and also about the bass! Of course I'm a sucker for a nice strong bass. It's a nice piece for slowly waking up in the morning, enjoying the day, thinking about what to do and where to go. Welcome to MacJams! Check out my latest song called Tango Macabre
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| announcer said 1148 days ago (October 4th, 2006) | |
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Good effort Since you asked for opinions ... here's my opinion and my advice. I agree with the tremolo synth needing to be in the center. You might try spreading it wider across both channels using the detune plug in that is available as a download I think or in lieu of that you could use a chorus effect on it. That would put that sound across the soundstage as a constant for the rest of the composition to fit into. As far as composing goes, I might suggest moving the piece along faster. Not a faster tempo but bring some of the new instruments in sooner and build the mix sooner. Bring the drums in sooner for more impact. The drums are one of the cooler portions of the composition with some really good sounds there. Strong drums would put the piece more in the mainstream if that is where you want to go with it. \ just ramblings. What you have here is good and remember that it is your music ... make it your way. You don't have to answer to me or anybody else here on macjams: we are not your bosses. You are the boss of your own music. That is why it is so much fun! Check out my latest song called It Was a Dark and Stormy Night
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| j2morrow said 1147 days ago (October 5th, 2006) | |
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Enjoyable Nice mix of sounds. I like the way it switches gears throughout the piece. I too would bring the drums in just a bit earlier and do a bit more with them. Really like the violins that come in near the end. I'm not sure this is a rock song but I liked this a lot. Anxious to see where you take it. Check out my latest song called CAPTURE THE RAPTURE
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| B.J.C. said 1146 days ago (October 6th, 2006) | |
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Thanks all great advise from those that gave it, Ive got a lot of work to do on this song, just not sure how to get everything how I want it, this version is mostly just loops that have been edited to my liking. Check out my latest song called Talk To Me
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| said 1122 days ago (October 30th, 2006) | |
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cool song just do it and when you feel it its right.....its right peace!!!!! |
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Vic Holman
it will be interesting to see where you take this. the tremolo synth i would
of moved it to center a little earlier. when you got closer to the end the
song was just then taking on strength. good playing good job!