A Lonely Night

patsfan459

Genre: Alternative Rock

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A slow rock song, sounds like a theme song.

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Hits: 718
Comments: 9
Fans: 0
Plays: 236
Downloads: 28
Votes: 7
Uploaded: Oct 11, 2006 - 03:12:09 PM
Last Updated: Jan 12, 2007 - 04:03:52 PM Last Played: Sep 21, 2009 - 06:18:41 AM

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	said 1132 days ago (October 18th, 2006)
	i like dididit nice rythm good feel like the bass and piano give it some lyrics and mabey some guitar lead somewhere and youd be top 40 brother

DOCTORBIZARRE	DOCTORBIZARRE said 1131 days ago (October 19th, 2006)
	SOUNDS GOOD But I would do another take on the piano part. It sounds like it falls behind on a few notes? Cool choice of melody! Just make it a little tighter1 Check out my latest song called STORM

	Matty B. Boy said 1131 days ago (October 19th, 2006)
	a lonley night the melody is good...but i agree with DoctorBizzare. Check out my latest song called Sweet Lull-a-baby

patsfan459	patsfan459 said 1131 days ago (October 19th, 2006)
	Thanks Thanks guys for your comments and I hope to improve my work in the future. Check out my latest song called Ominous Awakening

mcsweb	mcsweb said 1129 days ago (October 21st, 2006)
	Nice effort The piano playing sounds a little stilted to me. There's also some timing issues that seem like they would be easy to fix. Finally, maybe it's just on my speakers, but the levels in the bass seem high and it distorts. Correct those issues and you have a solid little tune here. Check out my latest song called Pearls of Perfection

Electric Lobster	Electric Lobster said 1128 days ago (October 22nd, 2006)
	Needs some better mixing ! It seems to be a nice tune but the distortion hurts in my ears :( Check out my latest song called Rain Rain [vox/ Linda Courtien]

EZamor	EZamor said 1125 days ago (October 25th, 2006)
	good songwriting this piece is very well written. but the performance and mixing could be improved (the timing is slightly off and there is noticable clipping). Check out my latest song called Peace (One Drop in the Blue) (w/ LunaTrick)

	said 1122 days ago (October 28th, 2006)
	Nice key work I love the melody here, and the song composition has a nice progression and build up. There are comments above here that will help guide you to fine tune it. Keep up the good work. - Harold

	said 1119 days ago (October 31st, 2006)
	nice composition Needs some Equalization (bass is clipping badly). But a pretty good start. You are weaving a fine melody. Nice changes in mode and texture. The timing is a little uncertain at times. Try to pull threads, rather than strike individual notes. The percussion is too punchy.

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Artist Info

Name: Bijan Olia

I have been playing piano for 12 years and percussion instruments for 8 years. I have been using Logic Express and Garageband for two years, and composing has added a new dimension to my musical background. I participate in the Symphonic Band and Jaz... [see more]

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Genre Info

The terms alternative rock and alternative music[1] were coined in the early 1980s to describe punk rock-inspired music genres which didn't fit into the mainstream genres of the time. At times it was used as catch-all phrase for rock music from under

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