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A Lonely Night by patsfan459 [Email]

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Hits: 561
Comments: 9
Votes: 7
Plays: 234
Last Played: May 14, 2008 - 04:34:59 PM
Downloads: 13
Fans: 0
Uploaded: Oct 11, 2006 - 03:12:09 PM
Last Updated: Jan 12, 2007 - 04:03:52 PM
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Description:
A slow rock song, sounds like a theme song.
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i like dididit &mdash 10/18/06 - 05:58:12 PM
nice rythm good feel like the bass and piano give it some lyrics and
mabey some guitar lead somewhere and youd be top 40 brother

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SOUNDS GOOD &mdash 10/19/06 - 02:08:54 PM
But I would do another take on the piano part. It sounds like it falls behind on a few notes? Cool choice of melody! Just make it a little tighter1

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a lonley night &mdash 10/19/06 - 07:12:09 PM
the melody is good...but i agree with DoctorBizzare.

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Thanks &mdash 10/19/06 - 07:16:15 PM
Thanks guys for your comments and I hope to improve my work in the future.

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Nice effort &mdash 10/21/06 - 09:56:36 AM
The piano playing sounds a little stilted to me. There's also some timing issues that seem like they would be easy to fix. Finally, maybe it's just on my speakers, but the levels in the bass seem high and it distorts. Correct those issues and you have a solid little tune here.

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Needs some better mixing ! &mdash 10/22/06 - 06:00:43 PM
It seems to be a nice tune but the distortion hurts in my ears :(

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good songwriting &mdash 10/25/06 - 06:33:53 PM
this piece is very well written. but the performance and mixing could be improved (the timing is slightly off and there is noticable clipping).

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Nice key work &mdash 10/28/06 - 08:04:20 AM
I love the melody here, and the song composition has a nice progression and build up. There are comments above here that will help guide you to fine tune it. Keep up the good work. - Harold

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nice composition &mdash 10/31/06 - 02:51:21 PM
Needs some Equalization (bass is clipping badly). But a pretty good start. You are weaving a fine melody. Nice changes in mode and texture. The timing is a little uncertain at times. Try to pull threads, rather than strike individual notes. The percussion is too punchy.

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