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I made some improvements since it's earlier version which I hope make this song a much more enjoyable listen now. I took into account many of the suggestions and I want to thank everyone for their help. I'm sure this song is still far from perfect but for the most part I am satisfied with this and I hope it has improved greatly. I want to thank Leon for lending his amazing voice and it was a honor to have worked with him once again.
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Lyrics
Music and Lyrics: Brandon
Vocals: Leon
[Verse 1]
Out of all the crowded city streets,
in a vast sea of faces
I saw you oh so clearly
Stopping time in a city so frantic,
You are once in a lifetime
Attention to each detail
[Chorus]
You are my moonlight
The stars that shine bright
The shine that breaks night
My love at first sight
You are my skyline
The waves and the tides
The catch and the find
And one of a kind
I wanna hold you until the end of time
[Verse 2]
Truth be told I’ve never felt this way,
I never felt this before
Until I saw your face
I wish I could hold you every night,
and hold you so every time
And gaze into your eyes
[Chorus]
[Verse 3]
Slowly things begin to fall in place
a piece that takes on a shape
It all becomes complete
All by chance you walked into my life
It hurts right here without you
Longing for your touch
[Chorus X2]
Vocals: Leon
[Verse 1]
Out of all the crowded city streets,
in a vast sea of faces
I saw you oh so clearly
Stopping time in a city so frantic,
You are once in a lifetime
Attention to each detail
[Chorus]
You are my moonlight
The stars that shine bright
The shine that breaks night
My love at first sight
You are my skyline
The waves and the tides
The catch and the find
And one of a kind
I wanna hold you until the end of time
[Verse 2]
Truth be told I’ve never felt this way,
I never felt this before
Until I saw your face
I wish I could hold you every night,
and hold you so every time
And gaze into your eyes
[Chorus]
[Verse 3]
Slowly things begin to fall in place
a piece that takes on a shape
It all becomes complete
All by chance you walked into my life
It hurts right here without you
Longing for your touch
[Chorus X2]
announcer
but damn ... damn close to it. The mix is really good with lots of air
around all the instruments and the voices. The production hooks are in
all the right places and in the right amount. I especially like the end of
the first chorus ... nice touch with the break there. I like the almost A
Cappella treatment of the 3rd chorus. Great voice on this and nice
interplay of the vocal tracks.
What would make it perfect? (and it doesn't really need these things
they are just my personal suggestions)...Anchor the background voice
instead of letting it wander across the soundstage...Perhaps an 8 bar
piano solo as a bridge before verse 3 ... maybe a tasteful counter
melody from a guitar or the piano in the third verse.
Having said all that I still want to point out that I think this is a really
wonderful song. Thanks for posting it.