I can't believe no one's commented on this yet... Well, here you go!

Okay, first, the ending fade is too abrupt. Easy fix. Second, I think this
needs some sort of bridge or variation on the melody. The percussion
& strings become a tad repetitous without having a break or bridge --
especially since your vocals are so deliberately atmospheric and hard
to understand. I like the reverb on the vocals, actually -- especially
when they're layered as you've done.

Vocally, you're on key, and those sustained words are sung so
beautifully and with emotional impact.

Here I go comparing again... forgive me! This sounds very much like
Marillion. I really like the feel of this. I'm a fan!

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I always like how emotional and heartfelt your music is, and this is no
different.

I agree with Miss Chaos about the repetitiveness of the percussion and
the strings, although I didn't really notice it until the second listen. A little
bridge would probably improve this a whole lot!

Your voice is also really good in this, very clean and very pure - not to
mention that your pitch is dead on throughout the song.

A lovely piece, and as always I'm looking forward to your next upload!



-Einar S.

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so far im liking it, i like the feeling the instrumental gives. hard to decide which version is my favorite. pretty cool,.

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The music reminds me of early Cocteau Twins which is a good thing. The recording is a bit thin but nicely balanced.

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