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I wrote this piece as I started
a new hope started surounding me
so its a song for to see ..
hope you enjoyed it ...!!
a new hope started surounding me
so its a song for to see ..
hope you enjoyed it ...!!
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apb
.. I really do like your classical pieces Feter - very nice indeed. Not too
much, not too little - it's very 'summer', meadow .. light breeze .. idealic
setting. The fluttering in the wind instruments always makes me think
of birds. It starts like a sunrise onto such a day .. very happy. I'm at
a loss for how to make these kinds of pieces better - fine as is for me.
Feter
thank you my friend ..yes this is a piece expressing
my sunrise a bird singin for his new hope ,asking
for happiness ....so glad you like it ..and thnx for
your kind words !!
as you seem to be as a person. An artist's personality always comes
through in his work. That is really kind of a cool thing, because by
listening to your music I get to know a little bit of this guy named
Feter. This is a lovely musical interlude with which to enter the
evening time....
Feter
such delightfull words you brought Dadai ..
I realy appreciate these from a very respectable
artist and true musician .. glad this piece reach
thank you ...!!
Feter
such delightfull words you brought Dadai ..
I realy appreciate these from a very respectable
artist and true musician .. glad this piece reach
thank you ...!!
Enrique Gil
nice and simple. joyful and serene.
Feter
thnx alot ..I appreciate your kind words ..!!
jiguma
Another lovely piece Feter - you always surprise me with the breadth of
your musical knowledge and skill. I'll be away from MJ for maybe 3
weeks - will try to catch up your new stuff when I get back.
Peace, and take care! I hope happiness responds to your call!
Neil
Feter
I m so gratefull for your kind words Neil
wish you came back soon with all the best wishes
and Amen for all ..!!
Wildcat
when i clicked the link i didnt expect a clssical here...well done feter
Feter
I m glad you enjoyed it .. classical music big
part of my music world thank you !!
...Mr. Feter McMozart! A lovely piece this. Soothing. Hopeful. APB's
"meadow" comparison is dead on. I think I just saw the last of the
butterflies flitter away!
Be well!
Feter
thanx my friend ....glad you enjoyed it ..well
somebody not feelin well about it anyway ...!!
its simple and it brought a simple man prayers
livin somewhere on this earth ...!!
Feter
McMozart?? last time I recall was McNaulty !!!!
mcsweb
I'd like to see an effort to let the instruments move in independent but complementary ways. Right now most of the instruments seem to follow the melody established by the flute, so when the flute stops almost everything stops and where the flute so does just about everything else, leaving the piece sounding a tad choppy in places. Of course this is because I am listening to it against the backdrop of the classical music it seems to be emulating, which would be in the Bach/Vivaldi era. Still a very nice melody and some interesting work with trills. One production note: allow at least one instrument to continue the track (silently) so that the all effects can completely ring out and the piece is not chopped by GB at the end.
Feter
thnx .. this piece has its own mixutre in
answering with in narrow spaces as the flute
is the lead line .I used to write more alike
a choir that insterumental piece I know this
is an old piece of mine if you go listen to
the other pieces I uploaded before you ll feel
the change , but any how I loved this kind of
wed narrow mixed writing ..this is a problem
I had with fruityloop4 .. the endings need a trick
to deal with at Cooledit pro ..to make it sound
unchopped and natural ending ...ye I know what you
suggest but sometimes you feel like you want the
last notes end in time ..I never bothered this alot
anyway ..glad you pass by and hoping you enjoy the piece as well ...!!
Bowman
Bursting with sunlight and hope. On the technical side I would have liked
some more definition and clarity between the different instruments and a
little more space after the end but a very enjoyable piece Feter. Well
Done.
Feter
bowman .. as you notice this is an early renaissence
form of piece which what I was studyin when I wrote it
if you replace the insteruments by choirs or singers
will see the changes .but still the cello down gives
some support for some breath in colors ..and yes I agree
about the ending ..I ll try to recover it some how ..
thnx alot for your kind words ..it mean alot to me !!
I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. A mix of Euro and Middle Eastern
orchestration, not unlike an old family record I was just listening to --
The Baalbeck Overture by Towfiq Basha. This has a distant yet intimate
quality about it.
Feter
Richard you made a very spesific point about my
music writing ..renaissence one day was a world taste
was it eastern or European .. I m so glad you noticed
that .. thank you for your kind words .!!
Soon we will have our collaboration ready, called "Happiness Calling" -- with
sung lyrics!. You have drawn me back to Renaissance music with this one,
Feter. Thank you so much. When Harold hears our collab, he will understand
the foreshortened timings.
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Roxylee
Yes, a new day, a new beginning, sunshine, birds, definitely outdoors
enjoying God's creation. Like the first chapter of a new book. Very
pretty!
Feter
its all I m concern writing this piece and more ..
heart praises to God's Creation as hope planted everywhere
whatever dark conquor ..thnx for your sweet words...
I realy appreciate them ..!!
RickW
and beautiful music. Thank you Feter!
God bless,
Rick
Feter
Thank you for passing by glad you enjoyed it...
peace and God Bless ..!
Feter
Thank you for passing by glad you enjoyed it...
peace and God Bless ..!
musichead
I started out in classical music..I played string bass and cello. This piece
really took me back to those days I miss. Thanks for posting ..its very well
writen...
Feter
thnx alot my friend ...I m so glad yu enjoyed it
I do realy want to join serious musical study ..
thnx for yur kind words
DOCTORBIZARRE
This is beautiful sounds like your spirits are high from this piece. I like it. it's very moving. The addition of a nice solo bass would be cool in this! I almost hear it!
Feter
thank you very much for your kind words ...
I dunno if I got your suggestion well ..but yes
this is a bit easier kinda writing need a deep Bass
Glad you enjoy it thouhgh ...!!
I cannot comment on this, it is above my level to critique, just to say it is beautiful. I can't understand the tempo and scores that seem foreshortened in length.... But all flows well and is pleasant to me. Thanks! - Harold
Feter
Glad you enjoyed it ..!!
EZamor
this piece is pretty. i'd like to hear it played more slowly, and with more emotion. does your software have a good humanization function? also, i think this track would benefit from having a couple different clean single-instrument string parts with stronger attack, rather than using a string section pad with a soft attack.
cheers,
-=ez
Feter
I found using string set will soften the whole mood
than tence attacks ... as the flute floating up ..
thnx for your words ..glad you like it ...!!
EZamor
that can be true...but this track is already a soft piece, so you don't necessarily need for the string section to be soft. it's just a suggestion, but i think that nice, bright & clean single string parts would sound really sweet. harden the attack, so that there isn't a dealy when the strings come in, and it should sound more legato (instead of pulsating). but use a humanization function, or whatever, so that you have more true dynamics in the string line, rather than just having a delayed attack.
I found using string set will soften the whole mood than tence attacks ... as the flute floating up .. thnx for your words ..glad you like it ...!!
My first impression was that the song was too hurried. But as I work on my
collaborative version with Feter (which adds vocals), it seems less hurried. I
am trying to get more definition, stereo separation and humanization in the
MIDI instruments. Feter sent me his raw MIDI file which has three tracks or
voice lines. I am using both legato and attack change-ups to give the song
more movement and variety. Also allowing some instruments to solo. I am
getting a nice lesson in Renaissance orchestration from Feter. I thank him so
much. I am adding a light "1-rest-2-3" percussion track (my own tambourine
and ceramic drum).
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EZamor
that sounds very promising! hope we'll be hearing that revised version soon.
EZ: Check your MacJams mail -- the Notes link in the upper right corner. I sent you a secret link to a preview of our collaboration (with words and fortified, variegated soundbed). Oh, what the heck. Here it is, but it may expire in a few days:
http://www.schletty.com/music/Happiness_Calling_5_partial.mp3
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http://www.schletty.com/song
EZamor
thanks, seems like it's coming along well.
Here is our new version with voice:
http://www.macjams.com/song/25548
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http://www.schletty.com/song
Here is how our lyrics are shaping up for the vocalized version of "Happiness
Calling"
Happiness calling! Love is returning!
Happiness is calling to me, my friend.
Love is making my heart to sing.
Years spent in the darkness.
Now the sun is shining.
Emptiness filled me.
Bitterness killed me.
Oppression stilled me.
Now I'm free to give myself to you.
Happiness calling! Love is returning!
Hopefulness is now surrounding us.
Love is making your heart to sing.
Strength comes from the harmony.
Simple needs embracing.
Flowers blooming.
New steps taking.
Feelings sharing.
Now I'm free to do what I must do.
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ktb
you've really captured a wonderful baroque-ess feel. great mix. totally
upbeat feel. its cool you can keep such an upbeat vibe. amazing you do
it from where you are. thanks for sharing, this was a bright spot
Feter
so Glad you like it .. thank you very much
for your kid words ..realy meant alot !!
screamalexz
maybe it's some of the instrument choice that reminds me of elves. it seems a little short and ends abruplty other then that i think it works nicely.
ScreamX: Look for the new version which is twice as long and chock full of
singing and fortified instrumentation. The new version is called "Happiness
Calling".
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http://www.schletty.com/song
screamalexz
ah ok, i shall do that thanks for letting me know there was a new one :)
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Robert Smith lied, boys do cry
Here it is, Chance:
http://www.macjams.com/song/25548
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http://www.schletty.com/song
Enrique Gil
I really need to learn how to use the strings. I am not comfortable using
them because when I have tried, they sound too artificial. Your sound
comes out quite pleasant to the ear. This is a download.
Feter
Enrique Gil I m so thankfull for your suggestions
its a big problem to pick a realisitc sound for strings
but with a nice melody I think it works ok ..!
thank you for your kind words
eanbardsley
Feter, this is such a pretty piece. I love the Reanaisance sound, very moving, such a good portrayal of birds singing.
Feter
Thats realy Kind of you ... I realy Appreciate it !!
Feter
Thats realy Kind of you ..I realy Appreciate it .. !
This is just perfect.Now I found what replaces my morning Coffee. Thanks
Feter
so pleased you enjoyed this piece
its so special to me ...thank you
for your kind comment !!
Yep, a true composer in every since!!!!!!! This truly another masterful piece by Feter..... a wonderful listen!!!!!!!!!!
Many thanks Feter,
Wade
Feter
Thnx alot I m so glad you enjoyed the music piece
appreciated the kind comment my friend ..!
peace !
Hi
Feter
T he New McMozart ! Oh yes I can see that.
Hey! this was simply beautiful and so peaceful compared to the rat race
of today. what a treasure you are and a ' Fantastic Musician' I can hear you breathe and feel strong emotions as you play if thats the right way to put it ? so very peaceful and serene feelings washed over me as I listened. Thank you so much for sharing my friend.
Its just so very wonderful to listen too and for inspiration too
Peace
Dee.
Feter
Thnx alot Dee you too kind to write these comments
truely appreciated all these my dear ..God Bless !
Peace !