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| typeslowly said 2068 days ago (July 22nd, 2004) | |
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crying beer luvely... well crafted. type.... slowly, zebra. |
| girl-X said 2068 days ago (July 22nd, 2004) | |
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Nice voice The words touched me in some part of my soul. Check out my latest song called Entrance
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| Paul_T said 2068 days ago (July 23rd, 2004) | |
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The emotion comes through This is good . A story. A feeling. A hook, even! Check out my latest song called Armor Pajamas
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| TobinMueller said 2066 days ago (July 25th, 2004) | |
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Minimalist sweetness The lute is wonderful. Is it real? MIDI? loop? (Your playing is perfect if it is real.) The minimalist mood is well arranged, your choice of sounds, your use of space and quiet is very good and works really well with the lyrics, concept. Simple, poetic lyrics. Very nice track. Check out my latest song called Seafood Gumbo w/ AngelaHope
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| penguinsocks said 2063 days ago (July 28th, 2004) | |
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only gets better and better well done. love it when the "it's not always black and white, zebra" line comes in. i love the melody and rhythm when that appears. :) lute? cool! Check out my latest song called reel me softly in the shade
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| MissChaos said 2062 days ago (July 29th, 2004) | |
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Lovely This is so listenable... pardon the bad adjective. This got added to my "favorites" before the vocals even started. The only thing I would say is that the chorus needs a bass line. Just my opinion. Or perhaps a fiddle solo? With or without, this is a lovely little song. Check out my latest song called Mama Cries - Album Version (MJRF)
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| Cameron said 2062 days ago (July 29th, 2004) | |
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well done You have a created a very nice tune here; I especially like the lute arpeggios combined with the percussion. Your vocals are also excellent. The high synth string sounds fit in well; it's always a challenge to keep those high strings from sounding like a cat-fight. You have succeeded admirably. This piece has a good classical feel, almost medieval. As though you're a troubadour traveling from town to town.... Check out my latest song called Please Marry Me (w/PaulaMunk)
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| Suzanne said 2061 days ago (July 30th, 2004) | |
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breath i really like that you record your breathing before each breath.i haven't heard such nice male breathing since Donavon. touching and sweet, intimate and somehow perfect. (the bretahing whooshes into the mic in your later verses, which is too bad, it adds a harshesness that distratcs, for a second, your delicate vocals, but that is a minor thing.) beautiful. Check out my latest song called Rock The Baby With Voodoo (w/Tobin)
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Mcboy
zebra.....well done....lyrics r well crafted.....i lack it...