Hi Steve... Nice reflective music...Very Soothing... Good for prayertime...Peace...Dan

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Hi Steve,
I really like the soft chord structure in here, and the piano comes and
goes beautifully, like sunlight glinting on the water. Unfortunately the
synthesizer you chose has a synthetic harshness that doesn't quite give
the gentle backing sound, it is a very foreground "sharp" sound. I would
suggest choosing a softer synth, maybe double that track and use two
different sounds panned apart a little (maybe a vox, but NOT Bondi
Breath, smirk, and maybe a brass or flute) and keep the volume low, so
the piano work can shine through.
ttfn,
Drakonis

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It's so good to get your feedback on this I will have a go at what you suggest!
The 2 pan thing sounds interesting I kaughed at the sawteeth bit in the title I
suspected then that I used the wrong synth.
Thanks Drak - back to the drawing board as the saying goes! (in England)

Steve

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Very pretty and peaceful...:-)

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Thanks Dan your comments are very encouraging.

Steve

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Thanks Roxy - as usual, you put me in a different place (with your poetic
description) other than sat at my computer.

Thanks

Stephen (from England)

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Thank you Steve for this beautiful piece. It is reverent and worshipful, and
I responded to it by worshiping our Lord while listening. God bless, Rick


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Thanks so much Rick -To God Be The Glory.

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..and nice ambient feeling. Creating a nice emotional response also. The
piano in the background could either be louder, or the string sounds (or
synth sounds) could be backed off. The piano sounds really good .

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Sorry for the late reply on your comment, I don't know how I missed it.
Your comments are very welcome and constructive these are great comments to learn from. Thanks again

Steve

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...I can use some peace right now. Very
lovely...soothing...evocative...inspiring....many thanks!

Be well!

http://www.macjams.com/song/25291

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May God be with you through this time Micheal

God Bless

Steve

The next song posted on here has been written especially for you Micheal.

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