Well, unfortunately, if you remove your song, all the comments go
away too, so that long secret explanation I typed in the comments
about how to make the strings sound better on te prior song... is now
gone and still a secret. :-) Someday Macjams will let us have multiple
revisions of a song, so we can compare the fixes made. This still
retains a lot of its charm without the extra strings, but they did add to
it I think.. so I hope you try a new version sometime. Also, the overall
volume on this piece seems a little low, you may want to boost the
master volume a bit. But I'll repeat, this is a very pretty piece, both the
"Western"style theme and the "Spanish" style theme... as always, great
music from you!
ttfn,
Drakonis

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you are the most active and helpful guy around here. Thank you again. Man, I
wish I had the time to learn more about this! Music is food for the sould, I tell
you.

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No, you just got me on a night when I had some free time (very rare these days,
unfortunately!) I'm glad you find my ideas helpful, I certainly find your music a
delight. I always try to give honest helpful advice, because that is what I would
like from others about my music, so I can learn to write better pieces. Keep
telling the stories in your soul through music!
ttfn,
Drakonis

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such wonderfull guitar playin ...very
sweet character ..I found it worth higehst ratin
fav and downloaded ...very impressive work
well done !!

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but the guitar is me playing my keyboard. I wish I had time to learn guitar. the
melody is mine though.

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sound neat ..!!

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Well, you have a romantic soul, that's for sure! Another beautiful
composition by you. The software instruments sound great. It seems
like it might be a little quiet, so, as drakonis says, maybe if you do
another version consider raising the volume a bit.

Very pretty, again.

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thanks for your comments, I really appreciate them, coming from somebody
with your talents. Thank you

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Enrique, I could listen to you for hours. You have such a sweet sense of
beauty in your compositions, and a wonderful touch on the keyboard. A
sincere pleasure to listen to.

God bless,

Rick


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Your comments were very encouraging. I am very glad you liked it.

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I can feel the title throughout the song. Beautiful

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Thank you. you girls need to post more of your creations. Look forward to.

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This was beautiful the first time, and it's still beautiful! :-)

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I am glad you liked it...

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I love this kind of music. Accoustic guitar, piano, strings. Charming! Very nice ending of the theme towards the end before the guitar starts again. Subtle and beautiful. And if I may, here are a few ideas I had when listening. I could imagine the piano coming in at an octave lower to built up to the higher notes. Also, I usually alter the release of the strings to make the sound a little softer and more organic. And since your melody is quite pronounced the way it is, the strings may be even more effective if you use them supporting the melodies with a simple counter melody rather than playing the same melody (towards the end, I mean). Needless to say, these just ideas, your work is perfect in its own way. Can't wait to listen to your other posts!

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Still learning how to transform my music into sounds. I will work on your suggestions. your comments are appreciated. Thanks again.

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this is wonderful. the modulations to minor work nicely. i guess for
symmetry, i would have ended up with a fifth part in major, but that's
just me...

the guitar is convincing: if i hadn't read your post i might not have
guessed it wasn't a guitar. it sures sounds like something you could
really play on a guitar....

somehow the counterpoint in the background is not quite loud
enough, and maybe it needs to be a little more differentiated from the
guitar's melody.....

but, don't get me wrong, i like this piece very much. thank you.

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well, thank you for you comments. I really like to hear from others in order to continue to improve my music and you input is appreciated. See you!.

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A lovely composition and very soothing. Love it!

Be well!

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Is good to hear from you again and am very happy to hear you like this melody. See you around.

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