starting the song with the chorus. Lyrics, message, voice, harmony were
all terrific. The only crit I can offer is to bring up the volume on your
vocals.

God bless,

Rick


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Hmmm... I left the levels at 0.0, and thought that if I raised them, it would be
too loud... any technical advice would be welcomed from anyone. I'm glad
you liked this and I might raise the levels and repost. Thank you. :-)

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To enhance the beauty of the song, try any or all of the following:



1) Compress the vocals and pull out the mid/bottom midrange

2) Add gain to bottom mids of the guitar(s)

3) Add low end to the guitars or add a bass (or synth bass) to help round
things
out



Everything sounds like its all done in the same frequency range. Perhaps
you'll
want to reverse your effects; like making the vocals dryer.



Hope this helps



Oh, by the way. Not sure if I told you, but I was asked last minute last week to
fill in for the music director at church last Sunday and two Sundays ago. I'd
gotten the call the Thursday before the first Sunday. I stated that I was out of
practice and to use me as a last resort. Well, somehow, I ended up being "it".
It felt weird, humbling, uncomfortable and glorious. God is great. I don't
know where all this is leading, but for your part, I thank you for your prayer
and continue to covet them.



God bless you.



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That's great news! Yes, you had told me and i did email back it must have
gotten lost somewhere. I will certainly prayer for you that God will anoint you
mightily for this work. Thank you for all the suggestions- now all I have to
do is figure out what that all means. <G>

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Such a beautiful song! Wonderful vocals. Beutiful hamonies. A heavenly
touch! It is getting better and better every time I listen. (And the volume
could be brought up not only on vocals by also on instuments, but maybe
mainly on vocals ... experiment!)

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I'm glad you liked this song. :-) I will have to experiment with the sound
levels and effects to get it just right.

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...to my eye. Beautiful composition beautifully sung. By all means
experiment. I see you recieved some excellent tech advice! If you re-post,
I'll be back for sure.

Be well!

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that this song touched your hearet, Mike. Thank you. I will fix this after I get
my HD working right. Be well, bro. :-)

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Thank you for your music....
It´s very wonderful...you sing very beautiful.

Take care
Thomas

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I'm so glad you commented, because I hadn't known about your music.
Awesome!!! Thank you. I am happy that you liked my song. :-)

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Roxylee what a delicate sweet singin you did here
I liked the song very much !! thank you for sharing
well done !!

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Thank you so much. :-) I'm trying to learn how to do sound levels and mic placement, to make it sound better, but i'm glad you liked this one. :-)

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What a great song.. : ): ) : ) especially on Valentines Day: ) THANKYOU It's all so beautiful You really inspire me! I have to turn up the volume alot though it's to quiet some technic-thing I believe.
Really looking forward to more of You haven't heard all of Your stuff yet:)You describe the process well that's greaT! Take Care:)
MUSIC UNITES

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Thank you for listening to my songs, and I'm glad this inspired you on Valentines's Day. :-) Have a great one! :-)

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As usual, I am stunned by the harmony you create!! What a great worship song!

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Your grandma, who you never got to meet, taught me how ti do harmony. I suppose it's easy for me because I've sung it all my life. I've love to sing with you sometime. :-)

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I think everyone gave fine advice on this as far as producing a song that would sound . . . well, like other songs. It has a live feel to it the way it is. I sense that you recorded the main voice along with the guitar? If not the voice sounds a little off mike which is why I guess the advice is to make it dry. In any case your vocalizations are beautiful and the feel of the song is "live" which is the best way for worship to be done anyway. I guess most folks just want to hear your voice up front and I can't blame them, but I feel that the song is unique in that it is distinctly non-studio in its presentation. Am I making any sense?

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and this is funny, but I'm currently in the process of redoing this one, starting with syncing up the piano notes. I was going for a loose, jazzy type thing, but it didn't work. Also, I now have a better mic, and have learned (duh) to play guitar in a separate track. It will take me awhile to get it done, but it should be interesting to see if I can improve it. Thank you so much for your input! :-)

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Roxylee
You sound like an angel.........Keep praising the Lord He is coming soon.

God Bless You
Soul Man

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Discerning the times and walking soberly as I watch. Amazing things and counterfeits going on... Anyway, thank you for listening to my music, and welcome to MacJams, my brother in Spirit.

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This song has an anointing on it.....it makes me worship and praise the Lord.


God Bless you my sister

Italo/Soulman

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Your comment was a answer to prayer today. I was asking the Lord if any of my songs had any effect on anyone, in re to worship. Thank you so much for listening and taking the time to comment. Your words encourages me to write more worship songs. :-)

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Very nice song - full of harmony and atmosphere. Brava!

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It means a lot to me that you listen to my songs- thank you! :-)

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